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Paradise is here for us!

Korean DJs Jeiff and Young Do have joined forces with the Clazziquai’s vocalist Horan for “Paradise," which was released yesterday.

“Paradise” is a dreamy future bass track that boasts impeccable harmony of minor acoustic guitar riffs, subtle pad synths and Horan’s unparalleled vocals.

Jeiff showed his affection for the production on his Instagram yesterday with the caption, “We worked really hard for this song.”

In particular, “Paradise” is creating a buzz among Horan’s fans, as it is her first featured song in eight months since Lazybone’s “Light the turn signal” from last June.

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Paradise is here for us!

Korean DJs Jeiff and Young Do have joined forces with the Clazziquai’s vocalist, Horan, for “Paradise,", which was released yesterday.

The quotation marks come before the comma.

“Paradise” is a dreamy, future bass track that boasts an impeccable harmony of minor acoustic guitar riffs, subtle pad synths, and Horan’s unparalleled vocals.

Jeiff showed his affection for the production on his Instagram yesterday with the caption, “We worked really hard foron this song".

The period has to come after the quotation marks.

In particular, “Paradise” is creating a buzz among Horan’s fans, as it is her first featured song in eight months, since Lazybone’s “Light the tTurn sSignal” from last June.

"It is" is often said/written as "it's".

Proper nouns, such as the title of a song, have to be capitalized.

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Korean DJs Jeiff and Young Do have joined forces with the Clazziquai’s vocalist Horan for “Paradise," which was released yesterday.


Korean DJs Jeiff and Young Do have joined forces with the Clazziquai’s vocalist, Horan, for “Paradise,", which was released yesterday.

The quotation marks come before the comma.

“Paradise” is a dreamy future bass track that boasts impeccable harmony of minor acoustic guitar riffs, subtle pad synths and Horan’s unparalleled vocals.


“Paradise” is a dreamy, future bass track that boasts an impeccable harmony of minor acoustic guitar riffs, subtle pad synths, and Horan’s unparalleled vocals.

Jeiff showed his affection for the production on his Instagram yesterday with the caption, “We worked really hard for this song.”


Jeiff showed his affection for the production on his Instagram yesterday with the caption, “We worked really hard foron this song".

The period has to come after the quotation marks.

In particular, “Paradise” is creating a buzz among Horan’s fans, as it is her first featured song in eight months since Lazybone’s “Light the turn signal” from last June.


In particular, “Paradise” is creating a buzz among Horan’s fans, as it is her first featured song in eight months, since Lazybone’s “Light the tTurn sSignal” from last June.

"It is" is often said/written as "it's". Proper nouns, such as the title of a song, have to be capitalized.

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