June 29, 2020
Paul is dead
The last time I wrote a text, it was about The Beatles and I had a lot of feedbacks, so I will continue to write about The Beatles :)
I'm going to speak about the myth that Paul McCartney died in 1966. I think it is funny because that means that fake news and conspiracy theories existed before the area of Internet.
Some people (I don't know exactly who), think that Paul McCarney died in a car accident in 1966 and that hints are hidden in songs and pictures of the Beatles. These people think that an another person substitute him after his death.
For instance, on the famous picture of the album Abbey Road, Paul smoke with his right hand, but he was left handed. He is also bare feet, symbols of death in some cultures. John Lennon is in white, Ringo in black and Georges with jeans, simuling the funeral of Paul (it is the conspiracy point of view). In addition, the car behind the Beatles has the number LMW 28 IF, meaning "Living McCartney Would be 28 IF". This fact is wrong because Paul was 27 at that time.
Other hints in the songs, some people think that John says "I buried Paul" in the song "Strawberry Fields Forrever". In the song "I'm so tired", people think that John says "Paul is a dead man, miss him, miss him, miss him".
In reality, Paul just had a motorcycle accident in 1966 and had no serious injuries. He is still alive today. And if Paul was subsituted by an another person, this person was more creative than Paul because the best albums of the Beatles were made after 1966.
The last time I wrote a text, it was about The Beatles and I had a lot of feedbacks, so I will continue to write about The Beatles :)
feedback is usually uncountable, like rice
These people think that an another person was substituted for him after his death.
it's kind of hard to explain but you have to decide whether you want to portray it as a one-time event or an ongoing one. I've corrected it to a one time event. 'another person has substituted for him since his death' would also work and would indicate an ongoing event. The verb needs a tense/aspect though, which is why simply writing substitute doesn't work.
For instance, oin the famous picturecover of the album Abbey Road, Paul smokes with his right hand, but he was left handed.
A couple of mechanics things, and smokes needs a tense.
He is also bare feefoot, symbols of death in some cultures.
John Lennon is in white, Ringo in black and Georges withears jeans, simulating the funeral of Paul (it is the conspiracy point of view).
Feedback
Very good and fluid overall
I think it is funny because that means that fake news and conspiracy theories existed even before the area of Iinternet.
You could also say "... existed before the internet era", "... existed before the invention of the internet", "... before the age of the internet", or "... before the Information Age."
(Internet is correct both capitalized or lowercase, so you can leave it capitalized if you'd like)
Some people (I don't know exactly who), think that Paul McCartney died in a car accident in 1966 and that hints are hidden in songs and pictures of the Beatles.
These people think that an another person substituted for him after his death.
He is also bare feet,foot, which symbols ofizes death in some cultures.
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He is also barefoot, which is a symbol of death in some cultures.
OtheAs for hints in the songs, some people think that John says, "I buried Paul" in the song "Strawberry Fields Forrever".
In reality, Paul just had a motorcycle accident in 1966 and had no serious injuries.
And if Paul was subsitutreplaced by an another person, this person was more creative than Paul because the best albums of the Beatles were made after 1966.
Feedback
Really good! Feel free to ask any questions about the corrections I made.
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The last time I wrote a text, it was about The Beatles and I had a lot of feedbacks, so I will continue to write about The Beatles :) The last time I wrote a text, it was about The Beatles and I had a lot of feedback feedback is usually uncountable, like rice |
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I'm going to speak about the myth that Paul McCartney died in 1966. |
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I think it is funny because that means that fake news and conspiracy theories existed before the area of Internet. I think it is funny because that means that fake news and conspiracy theories existed even before the You could also say "... existed before the internet era", "... existed before the invention of the internet", "... before the age of the internet", or "... before the Information Age." (Internet is correct both capitalized or lowercase, so you can leave it capitalized if you'd like) |
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Some people (I don't know exactly who), think that Paul McCarney died in a car accident in 1966 and that hints are hidden in songs and pictures of the Beatles. Some people (I don't know exactly who) |
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These people think that an another person substitute him after his death. These people think that These people think that an another person was substituted for him after his death. it's kind of hard to explain but you have to decide whether you want to portray it as a one-time event or an ongoing one. I've corrected it to a one time event. 'another person has substituted for him since his death' would also work and would indicate an ongoing event. The verb needs a tense/aspect though, which is why simply writing substitute doesn't work. |
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For instance, on the famous picture of the album Abbey Road, Paul smoke with his right hand, but he was left handed. For instance, A couple of mechanics things, and smokes needs a tense. |
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He is also bare feet, symbols of death in some cultures. He is also bare Or: He is also barefoot, which is a symbol of death in some cultures. He is also bare |
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John Lennon is in white, Ringo in black and Georges with jeans, simuling the funeral of Paul (it is the conspiracy point of view). John Lennon is in white, Ringo in black and Georges w |
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In addition, the car behind the Beatles has the number LMW 28 IF, meaning "Living McCartney Would be 28 IF". |
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This fact is wrong because Paul was 27 at that time. |
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Other hints in the songs, some people think that John says "I buried Paul" in the song "Strawberry Fields Forrever".
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In the song "I'm so tired", people think that John says "Paul is a dead man, miss him, miss him, miss him". |
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In reality, Paul just had a motorcycle accident in 1966 and had no serious injuries. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He is still alive today. |
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And if Paul was subsituted by an another person, this person was more creative than Paul because the best albums of the Beatles were made after 1966. And if Paul was |
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