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emi

Dec. 25, 2019

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Parties

Does anyone not like various parties?
Is there anyone who never joins them?
What is fun about it?
What do you think about the people who never join them?
I tried to like them.
I'm not good at meet people.

If I am a person who can enjoy them, my life would have been very different.


あらゆるパーティが好きではない人はいますか?
パーティに決して参加しない人はいますか?
それについて何が楽しみにですか?
それらのパーティに参加しない人をどう思いますか?
私はパーティを好きになろうとしました。
私は人々と会うのが苦手です。
私がパーティを楽しめる人間であれば、私の人生はかなり違っていたと思います。

Corrections

Does anyone else not like various parties?

If you mean in addition to yourself, you should use "anyone else"

Is there anyone else who never joinsgoes to them?

What is fun about ithem?

What do you think about the people who never joingo to them?

I'm not good at meeting people.

If I amwere a person who canould enjoy them, my life wcould have been very different.

Feedback

I also don't really like parties! However, I do like small parties with just my friends. I just don't really enjoy going to parties and talking to strangers that much, so I understand your feelings! I think it's totally okay to not go to parties all the time, but every once in a while I think it's good to try!

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emi

Dec. 27, 2019

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Thank you for your corrections.(≧∇≦*)
I'm glad you understand my feelings.
I'll try to go to some parties.⁝(ᵒ̴̶̷᷄൧̑ ᵒ̴̶̷᷅ )⁝

Is there anyone who never joins them?

What is fun about it?

What do you think about the people who never join them?

I tried to like them.

I'm not good at meeting people.

If I am a person who canould enjoy them, my life would have been very different.

Parties

Does anyone not like various parties?

Is there anyone who never joinsgoes to them?

What is fun about ithem?

What do you think about the people who never join themgo to parties?

I tried to like them.

I'm not good at meeting people.

If I amwere a person who canould enjoy them, my life would have beenbe very different.

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emi

Dec. 25, 2019

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I thought it was a correction that respected what I wanted to say.
Thank you(*^_^*)

Parties

Does anyone not like vpariousties of any kind?¶
Is there anyone that doesn't like
parties?

Your sentence was fine, it just sounds slightly unnatural to say "various" here to me.

What is fun about it?

What do you think about the people who never join them?

I tried to like them.

I'm not good at meeting people.

If I am a person who can enjoy themhad been born (OR if I were born) a person that could enjoy parties, my life would have been very different.

Feedback

I am the same way, I can't stand parties. I get so stressed out and awkward, even when I am trying my best to enjoy it and fit in. You are not alone! :)

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emi

Dec. 25, 2019

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Thanks for your correction.
It is very easy to understand.
(*^_^*)
I'm not alone! (≧∇≦*)
Thank you!

Does anyone not like various parties?


Does anyone not like vpariousties of any kind?¶
Is there anyone that doesn't like
parties?

Your sentence was fine, it just sounds slightly unnatural to say "various" here to me.

Does anyone not like various parties?

Does anyone else not like various parties?

If you mean in addition to yourself, you should use "anyone else"

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If I am a person who can enjoy them, my life would have been very different.


If I am a person who can enjoy themhad been born (OR if I were born) a person that could enjoy parties, my life would have been very different.

If I amwere a person who canould enjoy them, my life would have beenbe very different.

If I am a person who canould enjoy them, my life would have been very different.

If I amwere a person who canould enjoy them, my life wcould have been very different.

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