Sept. 7, 2025
Part 2: Artificial Intelligence and Employment
On the other hand, AI may bring an end not only to routine manufacturing jobs, but also to numeorous fields based on creativity and profound knowledge. For instance, after ChatGPT has gained substantial popularity, the demand for people working with text, for example translators, has utterly plummeted. A plethora of other creative jobs is also facing a threat because of the AI dissemination. However, it is really unlikely for human art to disappear completely. Additionally, artificial intelligence may be used as a handy tool that could benefit creativity.
To conclude, the effects of AI on the job market are eminently controversial. On the one hand, it threatens to substitute a huge number of workers from various fields. From another standpoint, by doing so companies would optimize the manufacturing process, decreasing the marginal cost of myriad products. Furthermore, AI creats plenty of workplaces in brand-new fields, fostering economic and technological development overall. From my perspective, the pros outweigh the cons.
On the other hand, AI may bring an end not only to routine manufacturing jobs, but also to numeorous fields based on creativity and profound knowledgedeep understanding.
- I think profound knowledge is too strong for what you are saying here unless you do mean to say AI will change jobs that only people who are top of their field experts can do
For instance, after ChatGPT hasd gained substantial popularity, the demand for people working with text, for example translators, has utterly plummeted.
- Talking about chatGPT gaining popularity in the past => had
A plethora of other creative jobs isare also facing a threat because of the AI disseminationincreasing ubiquity of AI.
- jobs is plural => are
- dissemination is not really used for things, it's more so used in the context of ideas or information. I think ubiquity is a better fit for what you are trying to say
From another standpoint, by doing so, companies would optimize their manufacturing process,es, thus decreasing the marginal cost of myriad products.
- Changed the to their to be a bit more specific that they will optimize their own processes as each manufacturing process is different
- Added thus to connect the two phrases more fluidly
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Good job, very few errors :)
Sept. 8, 2025
Thank you so much for your corrections and detailed explanations!
Sept. 8, 2025
By the way, would the word proliferation be a suitable substitution for dissemination?
Sept. 9, 2025
Hi, yes you could write something like '... because of the proliferation of AI'
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Part 2: Artificial Intelligence and Employment |
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On the other hand, AI may bring an end not only to routine manufacturing jobs, but also to numeorous fields based on creativity and profound knowledge. On the other hand, AI may bring an end not only to routine manufacturing jobs, but also to nume - I think profound knowledge is too strong for what you are saying here unless you do mean to say AI will change jobs that only people who are top of their field experts can do |
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For instance, after ChatGPT has gained substantial popularity, the demand for people working with text, for example translators, has utterly plummeted. For instance, after - Talking about chatGPT gaining popularity in the past => had |
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A plethora of other creative jobs is also facing a threat because of the AI dissemination. A plethora of other creative jobs - jobs is plural => are - dissemination is not really used for things, it's more so used in the context of ideas or information. I think ubiquity is a better fit for what you are trying to say |
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However, it is really unlikely for human art to disappear completely. |
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Additionally, artificial intelligence may be used as a handy tool that could benefit creativity. |
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To conclude, the effects of AI on the job market are eminently controversial. |
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On the one hand, it threatens to substitute a huge number of workers from various fields. |
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From another standpoint, by doing so companies would optimize the manufacturing process, decreasing the marginal cost of myriad products. From another standpoint, by doing so, companies would optimize their manufacturing process - Changed the to their to be a bit more specific that they will optimize their own processes as each manufacturing process is different - Added thus to connect the two phrases more fluidly |
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Furthermore, AI creats plenty of workplaces in brand-new fields, fostering economic and technological development overall. |
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From my perspective, the pros outweigh the cons. |
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