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SummerTeaWater

Nov. 2, 2021

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Parks Near My House

There are four parks near my house which are not big but quite cozy.

On the left side of my residential area, there is a park for young students.
There are a library, a swimming pool and a playground there.
It is a very good place to take a walk, so I usually go there with my kids.


On the right side, there is a small park which has small paths.
Many pet lovers use the paths with their dogs.

On the south, there is quite bigger park than others.
Not only basket ball courts, but also long paths are there.
Near a fountain, there are always many kids to enjoy.

Like this, there are nice parks near my house, and I love them.

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Parks Near My House

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Good job! :D

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SummerTeaWater

Nov. 4, 2021

402

I always appreciate your advices :)

On the right side, there is a small park which has small paths.


On the right side, there is a small park which has smallthat has narrow paths.

Many pet lovers use the paths with their dogs.


On the south, there is quite bigger park than others.


OIn the south, there is quite biggerare parks than otht are much biggers.

Parks Near My House


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There are four parks near my house which are not big but quite cozy.


There are four parks near my house whichthat are not big but are quite cozy.

On the left side of my residential area, there is a park for young students.


On To the left side of my residential area, there is a park for young students.

There are a library, a swimming pool and a playground there.


There areis also a library, a swimming pool, and a playground there.

It is a very good place to take a walk, so I usually go there with my kids.


Not only basket ball courts, but also long paths are there.


Not only are there basket ball courts, but there are also long paths are there.

Near a fountain, there are always many kids to enjoy.


NearThere is also a fountain, there are alwaysthat many kids to enjoy.

Like this, there are nice parks near my house, and I love them.


Like this, tThere are nice parks near my house, and I love them.

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