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Vinson

yesterday

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Parking Ticket

Near our office building, there is street parking, but for saving money we usually park on the no-parking roadside although it's hard to find a spot.
Yesterday day I couldn't be bothered to find a spot, so I parked my car on the parking roadside. When I was walking in my noon break time, I found all the cars(nearly 50) parked on the no-parking roadside were ticked and the owners had to pay for ¥200 fine. I felt I was so lucky I didn't park there today.
On the other aspect, I don't understand why the issuer always catch us off guard when giving out parking tickets and how they ticket so quickly.

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Near our office building, there is street parking, but for. To savinge money we usually park on the non-parking roadside although it's hard to find a spot.

You can check out some Independent and Dependent clause lessons online for better sentence grammar.

Yesterday day I couldn't be bothered to find a spot, so I parked my car on the parking roadside.

When I was walking during my noon break time, I found all the cars(nearly 50) parked on the non-parking roadside were tickfined and the owners had to pay for a ¥200 fine.

Noon break time not a word in English. Usually say lunch break or just break at noon.
Since it is time, saying during instead.
Ticked not the correct word here. Usually say fined (getting a ticket).

I felt I was so lucky I didn't park there today.

On the other aspecthand, I don't understand why the issuers always catch us off guard when giving out parking tickets and how they ticket so quickly.

On the other aspect not a transition word. Use on the otherhand instead.
I’m not sure what you meant in the last sentence. Are you saying that I’m not sure why the officers give out tickets quickly and randomly (out of nowhere)?

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Vinson

today

2

I mean, why the officers don't give out tickets everyday, instead they do it randomly. And why they are so fast when they do this.

Parking Ticket

Near our office building, there is street parking, but forto savinge money, we usually park on the no-parking roadside although it's hard to find a spot.

Yesterday day I couldn't be bothered to find a spot, so I parked my car on the parking roadside.

When I was waltaking a walk during my noonlunch break time, I found all the cars (nearly 50) parked on the no-parking roadside were ticked and the owners had to pay for ¥200 fine.

I felt I was so lucky I didn't park there today.

On the other aspect, I don't understand why the issuer always catch us off guard when giving out parking tickets and how they ticket so quickly.

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Only ¥200 !?? Makes me curious how much the paid parking is.

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Vinson

today

2

The street parking is ¥3 per hour, the underground parking is ¥8 per hour or ¥700 per month.

Parking Ticket

Near our office building, there is street parkThere is street parking near our office building, but forto savinge money we usually park oin the no-parking roadsidezone, although it's hard to find a spot there.

"Zone" means "area" and "no-parking zone" is a common phrase.

Yesterday day I couldn't be bothered to findlook for a spot there, so I parked my car on the parking roadside where parking is allowed.

When I was walking during my noon break time, I found that all the cars (nearly 50) that parked oin the no-parking roadsidzone were ticked, and the owners had to pay fora ¥200 fine.

I felt I was so lucky I didn't park there tohat day.

On the other aspecthand, I don't understand why the issuerparking enforcement always catches us off guard when giving out parking tickets, and how they write tickets so quickly.

"The issuer" is a vague phrase to use for this situation. "Parking enforcement" or "the police" makes more sense.

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Nicely done!

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mars1

today

2

Oops, I missed one typo. In sentence 3, "ticked" should be "ticketed"!

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Vinson

today

2

You are so thoughtful, thanks very much.

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Near our office building, there is street parking, but for saving money we usually park on the no-parking roadside although it's hard to find a spot.


Near our office building, there is street parkThere is street parking near our office building, but forto savinge money we usually park oin the no-parking roadsidezone, although it's hard to find a spot there.

"Zone" means "area" and "no-parking zone" is a common phrase.

Near our office building, there is street parking, but forto savinge money, we usually park on the no-parking roadside although it's hard to find a spot.

Near our office building, there is street parking, but for. To savinge money we usually park on the non-parking roadside although it's hard to find a spot.

You can check out some Independent and Dependent clause lessons online for better sentence grammar.

Yesterday day I couldn't be bothered to find a spot, so I parked my car on the parking roadside.


Yesterday day I couldn't be bothered to findlook for a spot there, so I parked my car on the parking roadside where parking is allowed.

Yesterday day I couldn't be bothered to find a spot, so I parked my car on the parking roadside.

Yesterday day I couldn't be bothered to find a spot, so I parked my car on the parking roadside.

When I was walking in my noon break time, I found all the cars(nearly 50) parked on the no-parking roadside were ticked and the owners had to pay for ¥200 fine.


When I was walking during my noon break time, I found that all the cars (nearly 50) that parked oin the no-parking roadsidzone were ticked, and the owners had to pay fora ¥200 fine.

When I was waltaking a walk during my noonlunch break time, I found all the cars (nearly 50) parked on the no-parking roadside were ticked and the owners had to pay for ¥200 fine.

When I was walking during my noon break time, I found all the cars(nearly 50) parked on the non-parking roadside were tickfined and the owners had to pay for a ¥200 fine.

Noon break time not a word in English. Usually say lunch break or just break at noon. Since it is time, saying during instead. Ticked not the correct word here. Usually say fined (getting a ticket).

I felt I was so lucky I didn't park there today.


I felt I was so lucky I didn't park there tohat day.

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I felt I was so lucky I didn't park there today.

On the other aspect, I don't understand why the issuer always catch us off guard when giving out parking tickets and how they ticket so quickly.


On the other aspecthand, I don't understand why the issuerparking enforcement always catches us off guard when giving out parking tickets, and how they write tickets so quickly.

"The issuer" is a vague phrase to use for this situation. "Parking enforcement" or "the police" makes more sense.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

On the other aspecthand, I don't understand why the issuers always catch us off guard when giving out parking tickets and how they ticket so quickly.

On the other aspect not a transition word. Use on the otherhand instead. I’m not sure what you meant in the last sentence. Are you saying that I’m not sure why the officers give out tickets quickly and randomly (out of nowhere)?

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