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prisci

July 28, 2022

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paris

Paris is the beautiful and romatic city of France.
It is also the capital from this country .
We travel in few than 3days this summer.
There we visit my aunt nina.
That is so exciting.We don't travel there for along time ago.
But finally the last time wasthere in paris with five.
My aunt nina is very nice and rich she has always great present for us and toys.
I hope we have so much fun like previously .

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Paris is thea beautiful and romantic city ofin France.

It is also the capital from this countryof France .

We travel in few thathere for/in 3 days this summer.

I'm not sure if you mean for three days, or in three days.

There weWe will visit my aunt nNina there.

That iIt's so exciting. We dohaven't travelled there for a long time ago.

But finallyI was five the last time wasthe were in pParis with five.

My aunt nNina is very nice and rich, she has always great present for us and toys for us.

Don't forget to capitalise names.

I hope we have so much fun like previously lots of fun together, like we did the last time I visited.

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Really great job! I hope you enjoy your visit.

pParis

Cities are in capital letters

Paris is thea beautiful and romantic city ofin France.

It is also the capital ofrom this country .

We will travel in few thathere in 3 days this summer.

There we visit my aAunt nNina.

Thatis is so exciting.We don't travel but we will not be there for along time ago.

But finally tThe last time wasthe were in pParis withfor five. days.

My aAunt nNina is very nice and rich s. She has always gives us great present for us and toys.

I hope we have aso much fun like previously .as before.

pParis

Paris is the beautiful and romantic city of France.

It is also theits capital from this country .

We travel in few than 3days this summer(?) are travelling in less than three days to visit my aunt Nina.

You have to define who 'we' is, otherwise it's ambigous (you and who?).

There we visit my aunt nina.

It's better if you merge this sentence with the previous one.

Thatis is so exciting. We dohaven't travelled there for a long time ago.

But finally the last time wasthere in paris with five.

I don't understand this sentence unfortunately

My aunt nNina is very nice and rich she has always has great present for us and toys for us.

I hope we have aso much fun like previously as last time.

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pParis

Paris is the beautiful and romantic city of France.

It is also the capital ofrom this country .

We travel in few than 3dayswill make a 2-day trip there this summer.

Depending on what you would like to say, you could write either, "We will make a 2-day (or 3-day) trip there this summer." or "We will travel there in less than three days."

There we will visit my aAunt nNina.

ThaIt is so exciting.We don't travel; we haven't been there forin a long time ago.

But finally tThe last time wase were there in pParis withas five years ago.

My aAunt nNina is very nice and rich she has always greatgenerous, and she always has nice toys and other presents for us and toys.

I hope we have aso much fun like previously .as before!

paris


pParis

pParis

pParis

Cities are in capital letters

Paris is the beautiful and romatic city of France.


Paris is the beautiful and romantic city of France.

Paris is the beautiful and romantic city of France.

Paris is thea beautiful and romantic city ofin France.

Paris is thea beautiful and romantic city ofin France.

It is also the capital from this country .We travel in few than 3days this summer.


There we visit my aunt nina.


There we will visit my aAunt nNina.

There we visit my aunt nina.

It's better if you merge this sentence with the previous one.

There we visit my aAunt nNina.

There weWe will visit my aunt nNina there.

That is so exciting.We don't travel there for along time ago.


ThaIt is so exciting.We don't travel; we haven't been there forin a long time ago.

Thatis is so exciting. We dohaven't travelled there for a long time ago.

Thatis is so exciting.We don't travel but we will not be there for along time ago.

That iIt's so exciting. We dohaven't travelled there for a long time ago.

But finally the last time wasthere in paris with five.My aunt nina is very nice and rich she has always great present for us and toys.


I hope we have so much fun like previously .


I hope we have aso much fun like previously .as before!

I hope we have aso much fun like previously as last time.

I hope we have aso much fun like previously .as before.

I hope we have so much fun like previously lots of fun together, like we did the last time I visited.

It is also the capital from this country .


It is also the capital ofrom this country .

It is also theits capital from this country .

It is also the capital ofrom this country .

It is also the capital from this countryof France .

We travel in few than 3days this summer.


We travel in few than 3dayswill make a 2-day trip there this summer.

Depending on what you would like to say, you could write either, "We will make a 2-day (or 3-day) trip there this summer." or "We will travel there in less than three days."

We travel in few than 3days this summer(?) are travelling in less than three days to visit my aunt Nina.

You have to define who 'we' is, otherwise it's ambigous (you and who?).

We will travel in few thathere in 3 days this summer.

We travel in few thathere for/in 3 days this summer.

I'm not sure if you mean for three days, or in three days.

But finally the last time wasthere in paris with five.


But finally tThe last time wase were there in pParis withas five years ago.

But finally the last time wasthere in paris with five.

I don't understand this sentence unfortunately

But finally tThe last time wasthe were in pParis withfor five. days.

But finallyI was five the last time wasthe were in pParis with five.

My aunt nina is very nice and rich she has always great present for us and toys.


My aAunt nNina is very nice and rich she has always greatgenerous, and she always has nice toys and other presents for us and toys.

My aunt nNina is very nice and rich she has always has great present for us and toys for us.

My aAunt nNina is very nice and rich s. She has always gives us great present for us and toys.

My aunt nNina is very nice and rich, she has always great present for us and toys for us.

Don't forget to capitalise names.

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