July 27, 2025
Parents
Parents are not only the father and mother, but they are also the first teacher, caregivers, advisers and role models for a child. They support us in every situation. They teach us how to survive in the society, how to behave, to choose right over wrong and many more. Children are just like soft clay, and parents are the potters. Just like a potter gives shape to the pot, parents shape the character and behavior of their child.
Parents are not only the fathers and mother,s but they are also the first teachers, caregivers, advisers and role models for a child.
You're talking about "parents" in general, so should be the same for fathers, mothers, teachers, etc.
They teach us how to survive in the society, how to behave, to choose right over wrong and manyuch more.
The concept of society is uncountable so doesn't take "the" here.
There is another usage of "society" that is countable, when you're talking about "a society" such as in one single country. But that would be "a society" and not "the society" as you haven't introduced a specific society yet. And it's more natural to talk about the abstract concept of society here anyway.
They teach us how to survive in the society, how to behave, to choose right over wrong and many more.
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Amazing English! Your metaphor with the clay and the pots is really good and sound really nice! Well done :)
They teach us how to survive in the society, how to behave, to chooseing right over wrong and many moreso on.
in informal text u can say etc instead of "and so on"
Children are just like soft clay, and parents are the pottmolders.
ig that works, but same shit
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best english i have seen on this website, just immigrate to america already LOL
Parents are not only the father and mother, but they are also the first teachers, caregivers, advisers and role models for a child.
They support ustheir children in every situation.
In the first paragraph you talked about children in third person so you need to continue that here, rather than using “us”.
They teach ustheir children how to survive in the society, how to behave, how to choose right over wrong and manyuch more.
Children are just like soft clay, and their parents are the potters.
Parents
Parents are not only the father and mother, but they are also the first teachers, caregivers, advisers and role models for a child.
They support us in every situation.
They teach us how to survive in the society, how to behave, to choose right over wrong and manyuch more.
Children are just like soft clay, and parents are the potters.
Just like a potter gives shape to the pot, parents shape the character and behavior of their child.
Parents
Parents are not only the father and mother, but they are also the first teachers, caregivers, advisers and role models for a child.
The "they are" is unnecessary. I think removing it will make the sentence flow better.
They support us in every situation.
They teach us how to survive in the society, how to behave, how to choose right over wrong and many moreso on.
Generally, we will just say "society" instead of "the society".
Children are just like soft clay, and parents are the potters.
Just likeas a potter gives shape to the pot, parents shape the character and behavior of their child.
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Good use of simile!
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They support us in every situation. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! They support In the first paragraph you talked about children in third person so you need to continue that here, rather than using “us”. |
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