May 4, 2025
I leave a couple of paragraphs I wrote down to practice a little. Do they sound naturally? Thank you beforehand! :)
A
The library of my late uncle’s house was an old yet stunning place to put down roots. The shelves were steeped in books of all sorts, whit many of them piled up on the floor as there was no room to slot them together with the others. The bookshelf was wood-crafted, and not only was it covered with gilded paint and ornaments, but it also had a circuitous vine that would bestow on the books the life they can only express with words. The verdant of the plant, rather than encroach on the structure, blended in perfectly and harmoniously.
Little did I expect to find such a treasure within this decayed house. With the room dimly candle-lit, the view was sheer bliss. A perfectly place to let off steam on days when you get off on the wrong foot or things go haywire.
B
I had to snake in the old house so I could carry out the mission. It wasn’t so difficult as the knob of the principal door was as time-worn as it was the rest of the house. Never had I seen a space as downright dark as this was. With little light wadding through the boarded up windows and succeeding in nothing but unveiling the moths of dust responsible of the dusty aftertaste of the air.
Paragraphs
I am leaveing a couple of paragraphs I wrote down to practice a little.
Do they sound naturally?
Thank you beforehand!
:)
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The library of my late uncle’s house was an old yet stunning place to put down roots.
Nothing grammatically wrong here, but you wouldn't think of a library as a place to put down roots. You would think of the house itself, and more particularly the neighborhood, city, town, etc. where the house is located as the place you are putting down roots (starting a family).
The shelves were steeped inacked with books of all sorts, whith many of them piled up on the floor as there was no room to slot them together with the others.
"Steeped" doesn't sound natural here, but there are many other words/phrases that could be used.
The bookshelf was wood-crafted, and not only was it covered with gilded paint and ornaments, but it also had a circuitous vine that would bestow oned the books thewith the very life they can only express with words.
This sounds a bit more natural in my opinion.
The verdantcy of the plant, rather than encroaching on the structure, blended in perfectly and harmoniously.
Little did I expect to find such a treasure within this decayed house.
With the room dimly candle-lit, the view was sheer bliss.
A perfectly place to let off steam on days when you get off on the wrong foot or things go haywire.
B
¶I had to sneake in the old house so I could carry out the mission.
It wasn’t so difficult as the knob of the principalmain door was as time-worn, as it was the rest of the house.
Never had I seen a space as downright dark as this was.
WithThe little light waddfiltering through the boarded up windows and succeedinged in nothing but unveiling the mothes of dust responsible ofor the dusty aftertaste of the air.
Very poetic!
Paragraphs
I'll leave a couple of paragraphs I wrote down to practice a little.
Do they sound naturally?
Thank you beforehand!/Thank you in advance
:)
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A
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The library of my late uncle’s house was an old, yet stunning place to put down roots.
The shelves were steeped in books of all sorts, whith many of them piled up on the floor as there was no room to slot them together with the others.
The bookshelf was wood-crafted, and not only was it covered with gilded paint and ornaments, but it also had a circuitous vine that would bestow on the books the life they can only express with words.
The verdant of the plant, rather than encroach on the structure, blended in perfectly and harmoniously.
Little did I expect to find such a treasure within this decayed house.
With the room dimly candle-lit, the view was sheer bliss.
A perfectly place to let off steam on days when you get off on the wrong foot or things go haywire.
B
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I had to sneake in the old house so I could carry out the mission.
It wasn’t so difficult as the knob of the principalmain door was as time-worn, as it wwas the rest of the house./as the rest of the house.
Never had I seen a space as downright dark as this was.
With little light waddgetting through the boarded up windows and succeeding in nothing but unveiling the moths of dust responsible ofor the dusty aftertaste of the air.
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Do they sound naturally? Do they sound natural Do they sound natural |
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:) A The library of my late uncle’s house was an old yet stunning place to put down roots. :) :) Nothing grammatically wrong here, but you wouldn't think of a library as a place to put down roots. You would think of the house itself, and more particularly the neighborhood, city, town, etc. where the house is located as the place you are putting down roots (starting a family). |
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The verdant of the plant, rather than encroach on the structure, blended in perfectly and harmoniously. This sentence has been marked as perfect! The verdan |
Little did I expect to find such a treasure within this decayed house. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
With the room dimly candle-lit, the view was sheer bliss. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
A perfectly place to let off steam on days when you get off on the wrong foot or things go haywire. A perfect A perfect |
B I had to snake in the old house so I could carry out the mission.
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It wasn’t so difficult as the knob of the principal door was as time-worn as it was the rest of the house. It wasn’t so difficult as the knob of the It wasn’t so difficult as the knob of the |
Never had I seen a space as downright dark as this was. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
With little light wadding through the boarded up windows and succeeding in nothing but unveiling the moths of dust responsible of the dusty aftertaste of the air. With little light
Very poetic! |
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