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Paragraph Sketches, No. 1 - X-Eyed Friend

Mr. N-0B0 was standing on the chair beside my study desk again. He’d been with me since I was six. I first read about him in a toddler’s book, and after that, he appeared in my room and never left. He’s entirely made of metal. I’ve never seen a single spot of rust on his body. He wears a cone-shaped hat, and his nose is a metal cylinder – like Pinocchio’s. He’s short. As a child, I often thought about hugging him like a doll – but I never did. He has a warm smile now. He didn’t always. At first, he had no expression – just two X-shaped eyes scratched into his face. When I was eight, I decided to draw a smile on his bare face with a purple crayon. It’s still there.

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Mr. N-0B0 was standing on the chair beside my study desk again.

He’d been with me since I was six.

I first read about him in a toddler’s book, and after that, he appeared in my room and never left.

He’s entirely made of metal.

I’ve never seen a single spot of rust on his body.

He wears a cone-shaped hat, and his nose is a metal cylinder – like Pinocchio’s.

He’s short.

As a child, I often thought about hugging him like a doll – but I never did.

He has a warm smile now.

He didn’t always.

At first, he had no expression – just two X-shaped eyes scratched into his face.

When I was eight, I decided to draw a smile on his bare face with a purple crayon.

It’s still there.

He’d has been with me since I was six.

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Paragraph Sketches, No. 1 - X-Eyed Friend


Mr. N-0B0 was standing on the chair beside my study desk again.


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He’d been with me since I was six.


He’d has been with me since I was six.

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I first read about him in a toddler’s book, and after that, he appeared in my room and never left.


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He’s entirely made of metal.


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I’ve never seen a single spot of rust on his body.


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He wears a cone-shaped hat, and his nose is a metal cylinder – like Pinocchio’s.


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He’s short.


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As a child, I often thought about hugging him like a doll – but I never did.


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He has a warm smile now.


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He didn’t always.


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At first, he had no expression – just two X-shaped eyes scratched into his face.


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When I was eight, I decided to draw a smile on his bare face with a purple crayon.


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It’s still there.


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