May 15, 2025
Mr. N-0B0 was standing on the chair beside my study desk again. He’d been with me since I was six. I first read about him in a toddler’s book, and after that, he appeared in my room and never left. He’s entirely made of metal. I’ve never seen a single spot of rust on his body. He wears a cone-shaped hat, and his nose is a metal cylinder – like Pinocchio’s. He’s short. As a child, I often thought about hugging him like a doll – but I never did. He has a warm smile now. He didn’t always. At first, he had no expression – just two X-shaped eyes scratched into his face. When I was eight, I decided to draw a smile on his bare face with a purple crayon. It’s still there.
Mr. N-0B0 was standing on the chair beside my study desk again.
He’d been with me since I was six.
I first read about him in a toddler’s book, and after that, he appeared in my room and never left.
He’s entirely made of metal.
I’ve never seen a single spot of rust on his body.
He wears a cone-shaped hat, and his nose is a metal cylinder – like Pinocchio’s.
He’s short.
As a child, I often thought about hugging him like a doll – but I never did.
He has a warm smile now.
He didn’t always.
At first, he had no expression – just two X-shaped eyes scratched into his face.
When I was eight, I decided to draw a smile on his bare face with a purple crayon.
It’s still there.
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Mr. N-0B0 was standing on the chair beside my study desk again. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He’d been with me since I was six. He This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I first read about him in a toddler’s book, and after that, he appeared in my room and never left. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He’s entirely made of metal. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I’ve never seen a single spot of rust on his body. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He wears a cone-shaped hat, and his nose is a metal cylinder – like Pinocchio’s. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He’s short. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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As a child, I often thought about hugging him like a doll – but I never did. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He has a warm smile now. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He didn’t always. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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At first, he had no expression – just two X-shaped eyes scratched into his face. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When I was eight, I decided to draw a smile on his bare face with a purple crayon. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It’s still there. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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