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courageuse19

Oct. 1, 2022

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First of all, I am not good in English. I learn alone at home and I want to improve English because after five months, I'll see my friend, therefore I write in this site and I work very hard. My friend and I have not the same language. He speaks English and Spanish and I speak Arabic, French and a bit of English and Spanish. I fight day and night to improve it.I am so excited to meet my friend.

I always review lessons and I repeat the words again.If I don't understand any word I look up in the dictionary online.

I will also Listen more videos en English.

I'd like to say thank you for helping and correct my mistakes.

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First of all, I am not good inat English.

I learn aloneEnglish at home andby myself, but I want to improve my English because after five months, I'll see my friend, thereforequickly because I'll be seeing my friend in 5 months. That's why I write ion this site and I work very hard.

My friend and I have notdon't speak the same language.

He speaks English and Spanish and I speak Arabic, French and a bit of English and Spanish.

I fightwork day and night to improve it. I am so excited to meet my friend.

I always review lessons and I repeat the words again. If I don't understand any word I look up in the dictionary online.

I will also Lalso plan to listen to more videos ein English.

I'd like to say thank you for helping and correcting my mistakes.

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courageuse19

Oct. 2, 2022

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I learn aloneEnglish at home andby myself, but I want to improve my English because after five months, I'll see my friend, thereforequickly because I'll be seeing my friend in 5 months. That's why I write ion this site and I work very hard.

Thank you very much. You're really understand me. OMG!!!

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charliechip95

Oct. 3, 2022

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Thank you very much. You're really understand me. OMG!!!

No problem! Glad I could help. Good luck studying! 👍

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First of all, I am not good in English.

I learnstudy alone at home and I want to improve my English because after five months, I'll see my friend, tI'm visiting my friend in 5 months. Therefore, I am write iing on this site and I am working very hard.

This is what we would call a run-on sentence. It would flow better if you split it up
Ex: I study alone at home and I want to improve my English because I'm visiting my friend in 5 months. Therefore, I'm writing on this site, and I am working very hard.

My friend and I have notdo not speak the same language.

In English, we don't say that we "have" a language. This is just a rule we have.

He speaks English and Spanish and, whereas I speak Arabic, French and a bit of both English and Spanish.

Great job with this sentence. The only corrections I made were stylistic and just sound slightly better. Great job, though.

I fightwork day and night to improve it. I am so excited to meet my friend.

Fight sounds slightly weird in this context. I get what you're trying to say, but fight is more often used when talking about emotions or something physical.

I always review lessons and I repeat the words again. If I don't understand any word, I look it up in the online dictionary online.

Online dictionary sounds more natural here.

I will also Llisten to more videos ein English.

I'd like to say thank you for helping and correcting my mistakes.

You're very welcome.

Feedback

Your English is exceptional for a beginner.

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courageuse19

Oct. 2, 2022

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Thank your for helping me.

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courageuse19

Oct. 2, 2022

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I learnstudy alone at home and I want to improve my English because after five months, I'll see my friend, tI'm visiting my friend in 5 months. Therefore, I am write iing on this site and I am working very hard.

Hi!

In this sentence, I want to say;

-1- I studay alone at home= Improve my language. Okay.

-2- My friend from forieng will be coming in my country and we meet each other for the first time. This is the best challenge for me to improve my language; for speaking with him without diffiulty.

I hope you understand me.

First of all, I am not good inat English.

I learn alone at home, and I want to improve my English because afterin five months, I'll see my friend, therefore I will write in this site and I work very hard.

My friend and I have notdon't share the same language.

He speaks English and Spanish, and I speak Arabic, French and a bit of English and Spanish.

I fightwork day and night to improve it. I am so excited to meet my friend.

I always review lessons and I repeat the words again. If I don't understand any word, I look up in the dictionary online.

I will also Llisten to more videos ein English.

Feedback

Great job! You're doing very well

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courageuse19

Oct. 2, 2022

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Thank you for helping me.

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First of all, I am not good in English.


First of all, I am not good inat English.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

First of all, I am not good inat English.

I learn alone at home and I want to improve English because after five months, I'll see my friend, therefore I write in this site and I work very hard.


I learn alone at home, and I want to improve my English because afterin five months, I'll see my friend, therefore I will write in this site and I work very hard.

I learnstudy alone at home and I want to improve my English because after five months, I'll see my friend, tI'm visiting my friend in 5 months. Therefore, I am write iing on this site and I am working very hard.

This is what we would call a run-on sentence. It would flow better if you split it up Ex: I study alone at home and I want to improve my English because I'm visiting my friend in 5 months. Therefore, I'm writing on this site, and I am working very hard.

I learn aloneEnglish at home andby myself, but I want to improve my English because after five months, I'll see my friend, thereforequickly because I'll be seeing my friend in 5 months. That's why I write ion this site and I work very hard.

My friend and I have not the same language.


My friend and I have notdon't share the same language.

My friend and I have notdo not speak the same language.

In English, we don't say that we "have" a language. This is just a rule we have.

My friend and I have notdon't speak the same language.

He speaks English and Spanish and I speak Arabic, French and a bit of English and Spanish.


He speaks English and Spanish, and I speak Arabic, French and a bit of English and Spanish.

He speaks English and Spanish and, whereas I speak Arabic, French and a bit of both English and Spanish.

Great job with this sentence. The only corrections I made were stylistic and just sound slightly better. Great job, though.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I fight day and night to improve it.I am so excited to meet my friend.


I fightwork day and night to improve it. I am so excited to meet my friend.

I fightwork day and night to improve it. I am so excited to meet my friend.

Fight sounds slightly weird in this context. I get what you're trying to say, but fight is more often used when talking about emotions or something physical.

I fightwork day and night to improve it. I am so excited to meet my friend.

I always review lessons and I repeat the words again.If I don't understand any word I look up in the dictionary online.


I always review lessons and I repeat the words again. If I don't understand any word, I look up in the dictionary online.

I always review lessons and I repeat the words again. If I don't understand any word, I look it up in the online dictionary online.

Online dictionary sounds more natural here.

I always review lessons and I repeat the words again. If I don't understand any word I look up in the dictionary online.

I will also Listen more videos en English.


I will also Llisten to more videos ein English.

I will also Llisten to more videos ein English.

I will also Lalso plan to listen to more videos ein English.

I'd like to say thank you for helping and correct my mistakes.


I'd like to say thank you for helping and correcting my mistakes.

You're very welcome.

I'd like to say thank you for helping and correcting my mistakes.

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