Jan. 15, 2022
My trip to Algiers was not getting anything results positive.
I was hoping to spend have fun, to walk around, to go out alone,but nothing achieved what I want.
I have been staying home for three months without see anything outside. I have gone out just six days for treatment.
I have a non-stop headache because of cervical hernia and Not hiking.
I have endured three months that why I decided to face my mother To put an end to the farce.Packed luggage and requested a reservation to go back to where I came from.
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My trip to Algiers was not getting anything results positive results.
I have corrected your sentence grammatically but in English you probably wouldn't use this phrase in this context. You might instead say something like " My trip to Algiers did not go as I had hoped" or just simply "My trip to Algiers was not successful".
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Good job and keep at it!
My trip to Algiers was not getting anything results positiveI was not seeing positive results during my trip to Algiers.
I was hoping to spend havetime having fun, to walking around, to goand going out alone, but nothing achieved what I wanI was unable to achieve that.
"Spend time" is the phrase you would use here, and I also changed the verbs to the -ing form ("having", "walking", and "going").
I have been staying home for three months without seeing anything outside.
I have only gone out justfor six days for treatment.
Just a minor edit! Your sentence is good as it is.
I have a non-stop headache because of the cervical hernia and Nnot hiking.
Just a minor edit! Your sentence is fine as it is.
I have endured this for three months that why. I decided to face my mother T, to put an end to the farce.P I packed my luggage and requested a reservation to go back to where I came from.
I split up your sentences to make them sound a little more natural.
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My trip to Algiers was not getting anything results positive.
My trip to Algiers was not getting any I have corrected your sentence grammatically but in English you probably wouldn't use this phrase in this context. You might instead say something like " My trip to Algiers did not go as I had hoped" or just simply "My trip to Algiers was not successful".
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