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courageuse19

Jan. 15, 2022

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My trip to Algiers was not getting anything results positive.

I was hoping to spend have fun, to walk around, to go out alone,but nothing achieved what I want.

I have been staying home for three months without see anything outside. I have gone out just six days for treatment.
I have a non-stop headache because of cervical hernia and Not hiking.

I have endured three months that why I decided to face my mother To put an end to the farce.Packed luggage and requested a reservation to go back to where I came from.

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My trip to Algiers wasI did not getting anything results positive out of my trip to Algiers.

I was hoping to spend have fun, to walk around, and to go out alone, but nothing achieved whatwent the way I wanted.

I have been staying home for three monthsspent three months staying at home without see anything outside.

I have only gone out justfor six days ofor treatment.

I have a non-stop headache because of a cervical hernia and Nnot hiking.

I'm not sure what the 'not hiking' bit means

I have endured three months tinside. That is why I decided to face my mother T, to put an end to the farce.P I packed my luggage and requested a reservation to go back to where I came from.

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Great work

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courageuse19

Jan. 18, 2022

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May God reward you.

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My trip to Algiers was not getting anything results positive results.

I have corrected your sentence grammatically but in English you probably wouldn't use this phrase in this context. You might instead say something like " My trip to Algiers did not go as I had hoped" or just simply "My trip to Algiers was not successful".

I was hoping to spend havetime having fun, to walking around, to go out alone,but nothing achieved w and going out alone. But I did not achieve anything that I wanted to.

I have been stayingstayed at home for three months without seeing anything outside.

I have gone out just six days for treatment.

I have a non-stop headache because of cervical hernia and Nnot hiking.

I have endured three months that why Iof this and so decided to face my mother T, to put an end to the farce.P I packed my luggage and requested a reservationticket to go back to where I came from.

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Good job and keep at it!

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courageuse19

Jan. 16, 2022

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May God reward you.

My trip to Algiers was not getting anything results positiveI was not seeing positive results during my trip to Algiers.

I was hoping to spend havetime having fun, to walking around, to goand going out alone, but nothing achieved what I wanI was unable to achieve that.

"Spend time" is the phrase you would use here, and I also changed the verbs to the -ing form ("having", "walking", and "going").

I have been staying home for three months without seeing anything outside.

I have only gone out justfor six days for treatment.

Just a minor edit! Your sentence is good as it is.

I have a non-stop headache because of the cervical hernia and Nnot hiking.

Just a minor edit! Your sentence is fine as it is.

I have endured this for three months that why. I decided to face my mother T, to put an end to the farce.P I packed my luggage and requested a reservation to go back to where I came from.

I split up your sentences to make them sound a little more natural.

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Great job!

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courageuse19

Jan. 16, 2022

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Thanks a bunch.

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My trip to Algiers was not getting anything results positive.


My trip to Algiers was not getting anything results positiveI was not seeing positive results during my trip to Algiers.

My trip to Algiers was not getting anything results positive results.

I have corrected your sentence grammatically but in English you probably wouldn't use this phrase in this context. You might instead say something like " My trip to Algiers did not go as I had hoped" or just simply "My trip to Algiers was not successful".

My trip to Algiers wasI did not getting anything results positive out of my trip to Algiers.

I was hoping to spend have fun, to walk around, to go out alone,but nothing achieved what I want.


I was hoping to spend havetime having fun, to walking around, to goand going out alone, but nothing achieved what I wanI was unable to achieve that.

"Spend time" is the phrase you would use here, and I also changed the verbs to the -ing form ("having", "walking", and "going").

I was hoping to spend havetime having fun, to walking around, to go out alone,but nothing achieved w and going out alone. But I did not achieve anything that I wanted to.

I was hoping to spend have fun, to walk around, and to go out alone, but nothing achieved whatwent the way I wanted.

I have been staying home for three months without see anything outside.


I have been staying home for three months without seeing anything outside.

I have been stayingstayed at home for three months without seeing anything outside.

I have been staying home for three monthsspent three months staying at home without see anything outside.

I have gone out just six days for treatment.


I have only gone out justfor six days for treatment.

Just a minor edit! Your sentence is good as it is.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I have only gone out justfor six days ofor treatment.

I have a non-stop headache because of cervical hernia and Not hiking.


I have a non-stop headache because of the cervical hernia and Nnot hiking.

Just a minor edit! Your sentence is fine as it is.

I have a non-stop headache because of cervical hernia and Nnot hiking.

I have a non-stop headache because of a cervical hernia and Nnot hiking.

I'm not sure what the 'not hiking' bit means

I have endured three months that why I decided to face my mother To put an end to the farce.Packed luggage and requested a reservation to go back to where I came from.


I have endured this for three months that why. I decided to face my mother T, to put an end to the farce.P I packed my luggage and requested a reservation to go back to where I came from.

I split up your sentences to make them sound a little more natural.

I have endured three months that why Iof this and so decided to face my mother T, to put an end to the farce.P I packed my luggage and requested a reservationticket to go back to where I came from.

I have endured three months tinside. That is why I decided to face my mother T, to put an end to the farce.P I packed my luggage and requested a reservation to go back to where I came from.

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