March 7, 2021
Pandemic " When will you end? "
In Brazil, COVID-19 has devastated the population, and it does not seem to be going away anytime soon. Around April 2020, I was trying to optimistic but also realistic believing that by early March 2021 the pandemic would have been under control and we would be heading to a victory against the virus. However, unfortunately, due to the lack of agreement between the federal government and the states, currently the situation is extremely concerning. Hostipal beds are almost fully occupied, and cases are soaring and breaking records daily.
On top of that, the President's disregard for the virus really sets the country to an uncertain future. Instead of relying on vaccination in a large scale, he has been convinced that certain medications, which have not undergone strict study, will be the miracle key to put an end to the outbreak. Last saturday, the state of Sao Paulo has been imposed to an intense two weeks lockdown, which the president is opposed to, in order to contain the virus spread, but some mayors, who take president's side, still allow non-essential business to be open.
Therefore, I am not sure about the future nor about when we will be able to return to our normal lives. It is time to hold on tighly and rise above when this eventually goes way.
Pandemic, " When will you end? "?
In Brazil, COVID-19 has devastated the population, and it does not seem to be going away anytime soon.
"Does not" is often said/written as "doesn't".
Around April 2020, I was trying to be optimistic but also realistic, believing that by early March 2021 the pandemic would have already been under control and we would be heading to a victory againstover the virus.
However, unfortunately, due to the lack of agreement between the federal government and the states, currently the situation is extremely concerning.
Hostipal beds are almost fully occupied, and cases are soaring and breaking records daily.
On top of that, the President's disregard for the virus really sets the country on a path to an uncertain future.
Instead of relying on vaccination in a large scalelarge scale vaccination, he has been convinced that certain medications, which have not undergone strict study, will be the miracle key to put an end to the outbreak.
"He has" is often said/written as "he's".
LSince last sSaturday, the state of Sao Paulo has been imposed to an intense two -weeks lockdown, which the president is opposed to, in order to contain the virus' spread, but some mayors, who have taken president's side, still allow non-essential businesses to be open.
Therefore, I am not sure about the future nor about when we will be able to return to our normal lives.
"I am" is often said/written as "I'm".
"We will" is often said/written as "we'll".
It is time to hold on tightly and rise above whenuntil this eventually goes way.
"It is" is often said/written as "it's".
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Great Job! Just a few corrections!
March 7, 2021
Thank you. I was told that it is better to avoid using contractions when writting, but I guess the person who said that was just being strict.
March 7, 2021
In very few situations is it considered too formal to not use contractions. You'll find them everywhere in everyday life.
I hope this helps!
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Pandemic " When will you end? " Pandemic, " |
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In Brazil, COVID-19 has devastated the population, and it does not seem to be going away anytime soon. In Brazil, COVID-19 has devastated the population, and it does not seem to be going away anytime soon. "Does not" is often said/written as "doesn't". |
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Around April 2020, I was trying to optimistic but also realistic believing that by early March 2021 the pandemic would have been under control and we would be heading to a victory against the virus. Around April 2020, I was trying to be optimistic but also realistic, believing that by early March 2021 the pandemic would have already been under control and we would be heading to a victory |
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However, unfortunately, due to the lack of agreement between the federal government and the states, currently the situation is extremely concerning. However, unfortunately |
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Hostipal's beds are almost fully occupied, and cases are soaring and breaking records daily. |
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On top of that, the President's disregard for the virus really sets the country to an uncertain future. On top of that, the President's disregard for the virus really sets the country on a path to an uncertain future. |
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Instead of relying on vaccination in a large scale, he has been convinced that certain medications, which have not undergone strict study, will be the miracle key to put an end to the outbreak. Instead of relying on "He has" is often said/written as "he's". |
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Last saturday, the state of Sao Paulo has been imposed to an intense two weeks lockdown, which the president is opposed to, in order to contain the virus spread, but some mayors, who take president's side, still allow non-essential business to be open.
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Therefore, I am not sure about the future nor about when we will be able to return to our normal lives. Therefore, I am not sure about the future nor "I am" is often said/written as "I'm". "We will" is often said/written as "we'll". |
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It is time to hold on tighly and rise above when this eventually goes way. It is time to hold on tightly and rise above "It is" is often said/written as "it's". |
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Hostipal beds are almost fully occupied, and cases are soaring and breaking records daily. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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