Aug. 20, 2025
Painting my bedroom
Three weeks ago, my mother was laying on my bed next to me because we were talking about something not really important. When we ended up the conversation she started looking all my bedroom really focused and she found out that it was really dirty, specially the walls.
Since that moment, my mother has told me that we would have to paint all my walls soon.
Today was the marked day and she made all my family work for her caprice, why do I have to do it? I can live without having my room perfectly.
My dad play the worse role, he made a really big effort today. Poor of him!
Even so, we finally paint all the room.
If you are interested in the results, my bedroom's walls were yellow and now are white.
Three weeks ago, my mother was laying on my bed next to me because we were talking about something that was not really important.
"Lay" used intransitively to mean "lie" is more casual than standard usage
Painting my bedroom
Three weeks ago, my mother was laying on my bed next to me because we were talking about something that was not really important.
When we ended up the conversation, she started looking allt my bedroom really focused and she found out that it was really dirty, . Especially the walls.
Something about this sentence doesn’t sound natural. Maybe “she started to focus on my bedroom walls” could simplify it, or a pause indicated by commas could help with phrasing “she started looking at my bedroom, really focused, and she ..”
Since that moment, my mother has told me that we would have to paint all my walls soon.
Today was the marked day and she made all my family work for her caprice, why do I have to do it?
I can live without having my room perfectly.
My dad played the worset role, he made a really big effort today.
Poor of him!
Even so, we finally paint all thed the whole room.
If you are interested in the results, my bedroom's walls were yellow and now are white.
Aug. 21, 2025
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Three weeks ago, my mother was laying on my bed next to me because we were talking about something not really important. Three weeks ago, my mother was laying on my bed next to me because we were talking about something that was not really important. Three weeks ago, my mother was l "Lay" used intransitively to mean "lie" is more casual than standard usage |
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When we ended up the conversation she started looking all my bedroom really focused and she found out that it was really dirty, specially the walls. When we ended Something about this sentence doesn’t sound natural. Maybe “she started to focus on my bedroom walls” could simplify it, or a pause indicated by commas could help with phrasing “she started looking at my bedroom, really focused, and she ..” |
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Since that moment, my mother has told me that we would have to paint all my walls soon. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Today was the marked day and she made all my family work for her caprice, why do I have to do it? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I can live without having my room perfectly. I can live without having my room perfect |
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My dad play the worse role, he made a really big effort today. My dad played the wors |
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Poor of him! Poor |
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Even so, we finally paint all the room. Even so, we finally paint |
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If you are interested in the results, my bedroom's walls were yellow and now are white. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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