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Occasionally, I will write some ancient poetry to enjoy myself, but I know I don’t have a high level of writing them. It is just for fun. As far as I know, I think two people are good at writing ancient poetry. One is my colleague, and I only read two poems by him. Another is a young man from my former work unit, and I also only read two or three poems of him. I don’t know how to describe how good their poems are. However, I am not a poetry critic, but the feelings told me, which are called talent. So I wrote the words “Only after working hard do you know what talent is. ” l feel that no matter how I try my best, I will not write as well as they do. If some people are better at some fields than me, I always admit it. Don’t cheat others, but also don’t deceive yourself.

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It is just for fun.

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Don’t cheat others, but also don’t deceive yourself.

I don't understand what you mean by "don't cheat others?" Perhaps cheating is not what you mean to say??

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It is just for fun.

I don’t know how to describe how good their poems are.

If some people are better at some fields than me, I always admit it.

Don’t cheat others, but also don’t deceive yourself.

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Occasionally, I will write some ancient poetry to enjoy myself, but I know I don’t have a high level of writing them.


Occasionally, I will write somrite ancient poetry to enjoy myself, but I know I don’t have a high level of writing them'm not very good at it. Occasionally, I write ancient poetry to enjoy myself, but I know I'm not very good at it.

Occasionally, I will write some ancient poetryms to enjoyamuse myself, but I know I don’t have a high level of writing them.even though I know my writing level for ancient poetry is not high enough. Occasionally, I will write some ancient poems to amuse myself, even though I know my writing level for ancient poetry is not high enough.

You do not ever want to say "to enjoy myself", because in vernacular American English, that means something sexual.

It is just for fun.


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As far as I know, I think two people are good at writing ancient poetry.


As far as I know, I thinkI know two people that are good at writing ancient poetry. I know two people that are good at writing ancient poetry.

As far as I know, I think two peopleonly have two acquaintances who are good at writing ancient poetry. As far as I know, I only have two acquaintances who are good at writing ancient poetry.

One is my colleague, and I only read two poems by him.


One is my colleague, and I have only read two poems by him. One is my colleague, and I have only read two poems by him.

One is my colleague, and I only read two poems by himread only two of his poems. One is my colleague, and I read only two of his poems.

Another is a young man from my former work unit, and I also only read two or three poems of him.


Another is a young man from my former work unit, and I have also only read two or three poems of hims. Another is a young man from my former work unit, and I have also only read two or three poems of his.

Another is a young man from my former work unit, and I also have only read two or three poems of himof his poems. Another is a young man from my former work unit, and I also have only read two or three of his poems.

I don’t know how to describe how good their poems are.


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I don’t know how to describe how good their poems arecritic poetry, but ..... I don’t know how to critic poetry, but .....

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However, I am not a poetry critic, but the feelings told me, which are called talent.


However, I am not a poetry critic, but theI feelings told me, which are called that they are talented. I am not a poetry critic, but I feel that they are talented.

However, I am not a poetry critic, but the feelings told me, which are called.... I know how poems make me feel and I recognize when a poet has talent. .... I know how poems make me feel and I recognize when a poet has talent.

So I wrote the words “Only after working hard do you know what talent is.


So I wrote the wordstold myself: “Only after working hard do you know what talent is." So I told myself: “Only after working hard do you know what talent is."

So I wrote the words “Only after having workinged hard docan you knowappreciate what talent is." So I wrote the words “Only after having worked hard can you appreciate what talent is."

” l feel that no matter how I try my best, I will not write as well as they do.


l feel that no matter how hard I try my best, I will notever write as well as they do." l feel that no matter how hard I try, I will never write as well as they do."

l feel that no matter how hard I try my best, I will not ever write as well as they do. l feel that no matter how hard I try, I will not ever write as well as they do.

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If some people are better at some fields than me, I always admit it.


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If someWhen people are better at somecertain fields than me, I alwaysI am, I will always readily admit it. When people are better at certain fields than I am, I will always readily admit it.

Don’t cheat others, but also don’t deceive yourself.


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Don’t cheat others, but also don’t deceive yourself. Don’t cheat others, but also don’t deceive yourself.

I don't understand what you mean by "don't cheat others?" Perhaps cheating is not what you mean to say??

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