My hHome My Home

I live in Salvador, which is in Bahia, Brasil. I live in Salvador which is in Bahia, Brasil.

I love my city, sheit is beautiful, happy, warm (or hot?) -calorosa, Smell. It also has a rich history. I love my city, it is beautiful, happy, warm (or hot?) -calorosa. It also has a rich history.

Between warm and hot, both mean calorosa. However, warm is more of a positive quality, whereas hot is hotter, and it's a negative quality. Warm is a pleasant heat, and hot is a suffocating, insufferable heat. If you used hot, you'd probably want to say "beautiful and happy, but hot".

I love my city, she iit's beautiful, happy, and warm (or hot?) -calorosa, Smellwith a rich history. I love my city, it's beautiful, happy, and warm with a rich history.

I don't know what you meant be "Smell" so I tried to go from context.

Salvador iwas the first capital of Brazil. Salvador was the first capital of Brazil.

Unless Salvador still is the capital (I'm sorry, I don't know anything about geography), in which case it would be better to just say "Salvador is the capital of Brazil"

Salvador iwas the first capital of Brazil. Salvador was the first capital of Brazil.

She hadIt was an important city during the navigations because the sea current brings the ships to here, and sheit has a huge bay that helps Portugal to defend your ships. It was an important city during the navigations because the sea current brings ships to here, and it has a huge bay that helps Portugal defend our ships.

She hadIt was an important city during thefor navigational purposes because the sea current brings the ships to here and sheit has a huge bay that helpsed Portugal to defend your ships. It was an important city for navigational purposes because the sea current brings the ships there and it has a huge bay that helped Portugal defend our ships.

Salvador always receives several different people, forcedwho were forced to move or not, m. Maybe because of that, until today, Salvador ishas been friendly with your tourists. Salvador always receives several different people, who were forced to move or not. Maybe because of that, until today, Salvador has been friendly with tourists.

Salvador halways receivesd several different groups of people, forced or not, and maybe because of that, untileven today, Salvador is friendly with your tourists. Salvador has received several different groups of people, forced or not, and maybe because of that, even today Salvador is friendly with tourists.

In this town, you can visit yourmany historical places and churches. In this town, you can visit many historical places and churches.

In this town, you can visit your historical places and churches. In this town, you can visit historical places and churches.

You can eat yourmany different foods, some of that doesn't havewhich are not in all countryies, like acarajé e vatapá, which you only can eat this in Salvador. You can eat many different foods, some of which are not in all countries, like acarajé e vatapá, which you only can eat in Salvador.

You can eat yourdifferent foods, some of that doesn't havwhich isn't found elsewhere in allthe country, like acarajé e vatapá, you only can eat thiswhich you can only eat in Salvador. You can eat different foods, some of which isn't found elsewhere in the country, like acarajé e vatapá, which you can only eat in Salvador.

She has musicThere are many types of music here: the axé, capoeira, ect. There are many types of music here: the axé, capoeira, ect.

I'm assuming that you have a list of types of music at the end? Ect. is simply something you can add to the end of a list of examples.

She haThere is music: the axé, capoeira. There is music: the axé, capoeira.

You can visit yourthe beaches, I recommend Barra and yourthe lighthouse. You can visit the beaches, I recommend Barra and the lighthouse.

You can visit your beaches, I recommend Barra and yourits lighthouse. You can visit beaches, I recommend Barra and its lighthouse.

The city is alive during the night, so you can party all night. The city is alive during the night, so you can party all night.

The city is alive during the night, so you can party all night. The city is alive during the night, so you can party all night.

This city is amazing.! This city is amazing!

Technically, what you wrote is grammatically correct, but it would be strange to end with a period. It would be as if you said "This city is amazing" in an uncaring, unexcited monotone.

You must know.On second thought, it might be best to combine this with the previous sentence. "This city is amazing, you must know!" Or, perhaps, "you must come see for yourself!" On second thought, it might be best to combine this with the previous sentence. "This city is amazing, you must know!" Or, perhaps, "you must come see for yourself!"

You must know. You must know.

I agree with the previous correction in that this fragment would go much better with the previous sentence.