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Considering Buying a New Car

It will be difficult to live without a car, so I am planning to buy a new one, which I will give to my daughter when I leave Canada. Yesterday, I made a phone to a local Toyota sales agent, inquiring about some information about buying a car.

I have been driving Toyota vehicles for over 20 years, Toyota is really a reliable and affordable car for me. I'd like to buy a Corolla Hybrid Cross, targeting the 2024 SE model. The entry-level is over $30K, with a bit higher ground clearance than its previous ones (I forget the exact figure), and the remote function can power the car 15 minutes in advance, and other benefits. Surprisingly, when I asked the sales representative what the timeline was to pick it up if I reserved it immediately. She answered me that they usually told their customers would wait for 18 months. I couldn't believe it, I thought they may say 3 months or 6 months, but would never be 18 months.

However, I probably have to reserve it. Because the second-hand cars in the market are not reliable and have the same price as the new ones. While waiting for the new car, I may have to buy an old one and sell it out next year when the new car arrives.

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It will be difficult to live without a car, so I am planning to buy a new one, which I will give to my daughter when I leave Canada.

Yesterday, I made a phone to a local Toyota sales agent, inquiring about some information about buying a car.

I have been driving Toyota vehicles for over 20 years, Toyota is really a reliable and affordable car for me.

I'd like to buy a Corolla Hybrid Cross, targeting the 2024 SE model.

The entry-level is over $30K, with a bit higher ground clearance than its previous ones (I forget the exact figure), and the remote function can power the car 15 minutes in advance, and other benefits.

Surprisingly, when I asked the sales representative what the timeline was to pick it up if I reserved it immediately.

She answered me that they usually told their customers would wait for 18 months.

I couldn't believe it, I thought they may say 3 months or 6 months, but would never be 18 months.

However, I probably have to reserve it.

Because the second-hand cars in the market are not reliable and have the same price as the new ones.

While waiting for the new car, I may have to buy an old one and sell it out next year when the new car arrives.

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Considering Buying a New Car

I'd like to buy a Corolla Hybrid Cross, targeting the 2024 SE model.

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Considering Buying a New Car


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Considering Bbuying a Nnew Ccar. Considering buying a new car.

It will be difficult to live without a car, so I am planning to buy a new one, which I will give to my daughter when I leave Canada.


It will be difficult to live without a car, so I am planning to buy a new one, which I wi'll give to my daughter when I leave Canada. It will be difficult to live without a car, so I am planning to buy a new one which I'll give to my daughter when I leave Canada.

The comma is okay, just not necessary.

It will be difficult to live without a car, so I am planning to buy a new one, which I will give to my daughter when I leave Canada. It will be difficult to live without a car, so I am planning to buy a new one, which I will give my daughter when I leave Canada.

Stylistic choice, this sounds a bit formal.

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It will beis difficult to live without a car, so I am planning to buy a new one, which I will to give to my daughter when I leave Canada. It is difficult to live without a car, so I am planning to buy a new one to give to my daughter when I leave Canada.

Yesterday, I made a phone to a local Toyota sales agent, inquiring about some information about buying a car.


Yesterday, I made a phone to a local Toyota sales agent, to inquiring about some information aboute into buying a car. Yesterday, I made a phone to a local Toyota sales agent to inquire into buying a car.

Just making it more concise.

Yesterday, I made a phone call to a local Toyota sales agent, inquiring about some information about buying a car. Yesterday, I made a phone call to a local Toyota sales agent, inquiring about buying a car.

Yesterday, I made a phone tocalled a local Toyota sales agent, inquiring about some information about buying a car. Yesterday, I called a local Toyota sales agent, inquiring about buying a car.

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Yesterday, I made a phone call to a local Toyota sales agent, inquiring about some information about buying a car. Yesterday, I made a phone call to a local Toyota sales agent, inquiring about some information about buying a car.

However, I probably have to reserve it.


However, I probably have to reserve it., However, I probably have to reserve it,

Since the next sentence begins with "because," it's best to combine these sentences.

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I have been driving Toyota vehicles for over 20 years, Toyota is really a reliable and affordable car for me.


I have been driving Toyota vehicles for over 20 years,; Toyota is really a reliable and affordable carbrand for me. I have been driving Toyota vehicles for over 20 years; Toyota is really a reliable and affordable brand for me.

I have been driving Toyota vehicles for over 20 years,. Toyota imakes really a reliable and affordable cars for me. I have been driving Toyotas for over 20 years. Toyota makes really reliable and affordable cars for me.

Or, "In my opinion, Toyota makes really reliable and affordable cars." And I agree -- they make excellent vehicles.

I have been driving Toyota vehicles for over 20 years, Toyota is a really a reliable and affordable car brand for me. I have been driving Toyota vehicles for over 20 years, Toyota is a really reliable and affordable car brand for me.

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I have been driving Toyota vehicles for over 20 years,. Toyota is really a reliable and affordable car for me. I have been driving Toyota vehicles for over 20 years. Toyota is really a reliable and affordable car for me.

I'd like to buy a Corolla Hybrid Cross, targeting the 2024 SE model.


I'd like to buy a Corolla Hybrid Cross, targeting the 2024 SE model. I'd like to buy a Corolla Hybrid Cross, targeting the 2024 SE model.

This is good. You can also say, "I'm eyeing the 2024 SE model."

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The entry-level is over $30K, with a bit higher ground clearance than its previous ones (I forget the exact figure), and the remote function can power the car 15 minutes in advance, and other benefits.


The entry-level is over $30K, with a bit higher ground clearance than its previous ones (I forget the exact figure), and the remote function can power on the car 15 minutes in advance, andmong other benefits. The entry-level is over $30K with a bit higher ground clearance than its previous ones (I forget the exact figure), and the remote function can power on the car 15 minutes in advance, among other benefits.

The entry-level model is over $30K, with a bit higher ground clearance than its previous ones (I forget the exact figure), and thewith a remote function that can power the car 15 minutes in advance, andlong with other benefits. The entry-level model is over $30K, with a bit higher ground clearance than its previous ones (I forget the exact figure), and with a remote function that can power the car 15 minutes in advance, along with other benefits.

The entry-level is over $30K, with a bit higher ground clearance than its previous versiones (I forget the exact figure), and the remote function can power the car 15 minutes in advance, and there are other benefits. The entry-level is over $30K, with a bit higher ground clearance than previous versions (I forget the exact figure), and the remote function can power the car 15 minutes in advance, and there are other benefits.

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The entry-level price is over $30K, with a bit higher ground clearance than its previous ones (I forget the exact figure), and the remote function can power the car 15 minutes in advance, andlong with other benefits. The entry-level price is over $30K, with a bit higher ground clearance than previous ones (I forget the exact figure), and the remote function can power the car 15 minutes in advance, along with other benefits.

Surprisingly, when I asked the sales representative what the timeline was to pick it up if I reserved it immediately.


Surprisingly, when I asked the sales representative what the timeline was to pick it up if I reserved it immediately, she told me that they usually told customers they would wait for 18 months. Surprisingly, when I asked the sales representative what the timeline was to pick it up if I reserved it immediately, she told me that they usually told customers they would wait for 18 months.

What's surprising is the response so this should be one sentence. I'm not sure if she's telling you that she tells clients there's usually an 18 month wait or not though. While I can read this literally and it makes sense it feels a little wrong.

Surprisingly, when I asked the sales representative what the timeline was to pick it up if I reserved it immediately., Surprisingly, when I asked the sales representative what the timeline was to pick it up if I reserved it immediately,

Not a complete sentence yet...

Surprisingly, when I asked the sales representative what the timeline was to pick it up if I reserved it immediately., Surprisingly, when I asked the sales representative what the timeline was to pick it up if I reserved it immediately,

This is not a complete sentence

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Surprisingly, when I asked the sales representative what the timeline was to pick it up if I reserved it immediately., Surprisingly, when I asked the sales representative what the timeline was to pick it up if I reserved it immediately,

She answered me that they usually told their customers would wait for 18 months.


She answered me that they usually told their customers would wait for 18 months.

merged with above sentence to match the surprisingly assertion.

Sshe answered me that they usually told their customers wouldthey would have to wait for 18 months. she answered that they usually told their customers they would have to wait for 18 months.

She answered me that they usually told their customers would wait for 18 months. She answered that they usually told their customers would wait for 18 months.

You could say “she answered” or “she told me” but you wouldn’t usually say “she answered me”

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Sshe answeretold me that they usually told their customers they would wait for 18 months. she told me that they usually told their customers they would wait for 18 months.

You can combine this with your last sentence!

I couldn't believe it, I thought they may say 3 months or 6 months, but would never be 18 months.


I couldn't believe it,. I thought they may say 3 months or 6 months, but would never be 18 months. I couldn't believe it. I thought they may say 3 months or 6 months, but would never 18 months.

I couldn't believe it,. I thought they mayight say 3 months or 6 months, but would never be 18 months. I couldn't believe it. I thought they might say 3 months or 6 months, but never 18 months.

I couldn't believe it, I thought they may say 3 months or 6 months, but would never behave guessed 18 months. I couldn't believe it, I thought they may say 3 months or 6 months, but would never have guessed 18 months.

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I couldn't believe it,. I thought they mayight say 3 months or 6 months, but it would never be 18 months. I couldn't believe it. I thought they might say 3 months or 6 months, but it would never be 18 months.

Because the second-hand cars in the market are not reliable and have the same price as the new ones.


Because, the second-hand cars in the market are not reliable and have the same price as the new ones. Because, the second-hand cars in the market are not reliable and have the same price as the new ones.

This should really be one sentence again but I'll not merge it this time.

Bbecause the second-hand cars ion the market are not reliable and have the same price as (the) new ones. because second-hand cars on the market are not reliable and have the same price as (the) new ones.

Because the second-hand cars ion the market are not reliable and havare the same price as the new ones. Because the second-hand cars on the market are not reliable and are the same price as the new ones.

Because the second-hand cars in the market are not reliable and havare the same price as the new ones. Because the second-hand cars in the market are not reliable and are the same price as the new ones.

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Because the second-hand cars in the market are not reliable andyet have the same price as the new ones. Because the second-hand cars in the market are not reliable yet have the same price as the new ones.

While waiting for the new car, I may have to buy an old one and sell it out next year when the new car arrives.


While waiting for the new car, I may have to buy an old one and sell it outff next year when the new car arrives. While waiting for the new car, I may have to buy an old one and sell it off next year when the new car arrives.

While waiting for the new car, I may have to buy an old one and (then) sell it out next year when the new car arrives. While waiting for the new car, I may have to buy an old one and (then) sell it next year when the new car arrives.

While waiting for the new car, I may have to buy an old one and sell it out next year when the new car arrives. While waiting for the new car, I may have to buy an old one and sell it out next year when the new car arrives.

While waiting for the new car, I may have to buy an old one and sell it out next year when the new car arrives. While waiting for the new car, I may have to buy an old one and sell it next year when the new car arrives.

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While waiting for the new car, I may have to buy an old one and sell it out next year when the new car arrives. While waiting for the new car, I may have to buy an old one and sell it next year when the new car arrives.

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