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June 18, 2023

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Yesterday was a good day, because I received "kudos" when I showed the advance of my thesis to my Professor. Despite the praise I wasn't very happy because I was expecting some corrections, or some guidance. That's because I consider I'm just doing the basics and we could make a better analysis about the data.
Today was a chill day. In the morning I attended to my German lection, that was very boring because we just studied grammar. I prefer to watch a tv show and analyze sentences.

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Despite the praise I wasn't very happy because I was expecting some corrections, or some guidance.

Today was a chill day.

I prefer to watch a tv show and analyze sentences.

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Today was a chill day.

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June 21, 2023

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Yesterday was a good day, because I received "kudos" when I showed the advance of my thesis to my Professor.


Yesterday was a good day, because I received "kudos" when I showed the advancedraft of my thesis to my Pprofessor. Yesterday was a good day, because I received kudos when I showed the draft of my thesis to my professor.

Yesterday was a good day, because I received "kudos" when I showed thean advance of my thesis to my Professor. Yesterday was a good day, because I received "kudos" when I showed an advance of my thesis to my Professor.

"The" is used for a specific thing. Since you're talking about a general thing, use "a". If you were Einstein talking about his thesis on the theory of relativity, for emphasis, you could say "the thesis by Einstein" but in general you'd say " a thesis" and this point stands for most things. "A" is used in the general sense, "the" is only used when the reader knows exactly which thing you are referring to. Hope that helps

Today was a chill day.


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Despite the praise I wasn't very happy because I was expecting some corrections, or some guidance.


Despite the praise, I wasn't very happy because I was expecting some corrections, or some guidance. Despite the praise, I wasn't very happy because I was expecting some corrections or guidance.

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That's because I consider I'm just doing the basics and we could make a better analysis about the data.


That's because I considerthink I'm just doing the basicsre minimum and we could make a better analysis aboutof the data. That's because I think I'm just doing the bare minimum and we could make a better analysis of the data.

"Bare minimum" is more idiomatic. Just "minimum" or "minimum necessary" could also work and would be a little less harsh.

That's because I consider I'm just doingwhat I'm doing to be just the basics and we could make a better analysis about the data. That's because I consider what I'm doing to be just the basics and we could make a better analysis about the data.

I feel like you are missing a point in this sentence. It's hard for me to understand what you're trying to say.

In the morning I attended to my German lection, that was very boring because we just studied grammar.


In the morning I attended to my German lection, thasson. It was very boring because we just studied grammar. In the morning I attended my German lesson. It was very boring because we just studied grammar.

In the morning I attended to my German lection, thature, which was very boring because we just studied grammar. In the morning I attended my German lecture, which was very boring because we just studied grammar.

I prefer to watch a tv show and analyze sentences.


I prefer to watch a tving a [TV] show and analyze ing sentences. I prefer watching a [TV] show and analyzing sentences.

Some native speakers would also be fine with "tv."

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