Jan. 21, 2021
荷兰
我今天到了荷兰。我今天晚上在旅馆睡觉。天气很冷。整天下雨了。我今天没去看大海，我希望天气明天比较好去大海。然后，我应该尝荷兰的菜。
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一整天都在下雨了。 一整天都在下雨了。
我今天没去看大海，我希望天气明天比较好去大海。 我今天没去看大海，我希望天气明天比较好去大海。
there has a little bit wried，let me translate what I read in Chinese to English.
Today, I don't travel to the coast, I hope the weather tomorrow are better to go to see the sea.
the first part I totally understand what you want to say, but the last part blocks the logic.
rewrite this one, or let me know what you want to say in English. I can edit for you.
然后，我应该尝荷兰的菜。 然后，我应该尝荷兰的菜。
logical issue too.
然后，我应该尝荷兰的菜。
Then, I should taste Northland's food.
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Jan. 24, 2021
我今天没去看大海，我希望天气明天比较好去大海。
there has a little bit wried，let me translate what I read in Chinese to English.
Today, I don't travel to the coast, I hope the weather tomorrow are better to go to see the sea.
the first part I totally understand what you want to say, but the last part blocks the logic.
rewrite this one, or let me know what you want to say in English. I can edit for you.
I wanted to say: Today, I didn't go see the sea, I hope that the weather tomorrow would be good enough to go to the sea. Maybe this version is better? 我今天没去看大海，我希望明天的天气更好去大海。Thank you again!
Jan. 24, 2021
I see
Maybe you could relate to the late sentence, which will be more logical.
因为今天下了一整天的雨，整个天都灰蒙蒙的，所以我不得不改变计划不去看海了。
As it rained all day today, the sky is bleak/ black， I have to decide not to go to see the sea.
[ step by step; raining --- a bad vision/weather --- I have to change my plan ]
我只是希望明天的天气能变好。
I just hope the weather will be better tomorrow.
but your original sentence, when I directly translate in English that makes sense but in Chinese still not good.
Maybe you keep it simple.
such as 我只是希望明天的天气能变好
因为今天下了一整天的雨，整个天都灰蒙蒙的，所以我不得不改变计划不去看海了。我只是希望明天的天气能变好。
Because it has been raining all day today, the whole day is gray, so I have to change my plan that not visit the coast. I just hope the weather will get better tomorrow.
荷兰
我今天到了荷兰。
我今天晚上在旅馆睡觉。
天气很冷。
整天下雨了下了一整天雨。
下了一整天雨。
我今天没去看大海，我希望天气明天比较好去大海的时候再去。
我今天没去看大海，我希望天气比较好的时候再去。
然后，我应该尝荷兰的菜。
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