A phone call = I am worthy A phone call = I am worthy

"I am" can also be "I'm"

Today I received a phone call, can that makde me cry. Today I received a phone call that made me cry.

Today I received a phone call, can that makde me cry (inside). Today I received a phone call that made me cry (inside).

(Inside) (Inside)

This would go inside the sentence, not outside the period.

Between 2014-2017 I was working inorked for a company. Between 2014-2017 I worked for a company.

That was one of mythe highest points in my career history. That was one of the highest points in my career history.

That was one of mythe highest career historypoints of my career. That was one of the highest points of my career.

It sounds more natural without the word "history" after "career."

That was one of my highest career history highlights. That was one of my career history highlights.

I helped this company gain new business, customers and profit… I helped this company gain new business, customers and profit…

Make sure to stick with past tense in the past.

I helped this company gain new business, customers and profit… I helped this company gain new business, customers and profit…

Unfortunately I also makde a terrible mistake. Unfortunately I also made a terrible mistake.

UBut unfortunately, I also makde a terrible mistake. But unfortunately, I also made a terrible mistake.

So, the boss fired me aton Chinese New Year e's Eve. So, the boss fired me on Chinese New Year's Eve.

So, the boss fired me aton Chinese New Year e's Eve. So the boss fired me on Chinese New Year's Eve.

For peoplthose who don’t know, if you getting fire atd on such date tha date is considered an insult. For those who don’t know, getting fired on such a date is considered an insult.

For people who don’t know, if you getting fire atd on such date that i, it's considered an insult. For people who don’t know, if you get fired on such date, it's considered an insult.

Anyway, 3 1/2 years pastsed. Anyway, 3 1/2 years passed.

Anyway, 3 1/2 years pastsed. Anyway, 3 1/2 years passed.

Today, a customer callsed me to come to his office and collect a pay chequesck. Today, a customer called me to come to his office and collect a pay check.

Today, a customer callsed me to come to his office and collect a pay chequesck. Today, a customer called me to come to his office and collect a pay check.

Hey you foolish Bboss! Hey you foolish boss!

Hey you foolish Bboss! Hey you foolish boss!

You fired me 3 ½ years ago but your customer still thinks I am working for you. You fired me 3 ½ years ago but your customer still thinks I am working for you.

You fired me 3 ½ years ago but, your customer still thinks I am working for you. You fired me 3 ½ years ago but, your customer still thinks I am working for you.

You can say "I'm" instead of "I am".

WDo you want to hire me again? Do you want to hire me again?