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Study a foreign language as part of education

All young people should study a foreign language as part of their education.
Do you agree?
Nowadays educational system in my country is bilingual, that is some subjects are taught in a foreign language. I think it's a better and more natural approach to acquire a second language.
Dominate several languages is a great advantage when young people end up school period and begin to search a job. Every year many youngsters finish a degree and seek for their first job and language qualification can make the difference.
But a second language is not only important for their career. Youth is a great time of the life to travel around the world and mature learning from other cultures. For those journeys be able to speak other languages gives the opportunity to really immerse in foreign cultures instead of just be a sightseeing tourist .
I totally agree with the idea of young people should study a foreign language, because it's key to develop, in their future, their career as much as their personal life.


All young people should study a foreign language as part of their education.
Do you agree?
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I think it's a better and more natural approach to acquire a second language.

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Study a foreign language as part of education


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All young people should study a foreign language as part of their education.


All young people should study a foreign language as a part of their education. All young people should study a foreign language as a part of their education.

Do you agree?


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Nowadays educational system in my country is bilingual, that is some subjects are taught in a foreign language.


Nowadays, the educational system in my country is bilingual, t. That is, some subjects are taught in a foreign language. Nowadays, the educational system in my country is bilingual. That is, some subjects are taught in a foreign language.

Nowadays, the educational system in my country is bilingual, that is somerefore some of the subjects are taught in a foreign language. Nowadays, the educational system in my country is bilingual, therefore some of the subjects are taught in a foreign language.

I think it's a better and more natural approach to acquire a second language.


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Dominate several languages is a great advantage when young people end up school period and begin to search a job.


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Every year many youngsters finish a degree and seek for their first job and language qualification can make the difference.


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But a second language is not only important for their career.


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Youth is a great time of the life to travel around the world and mature learning from other cultures.


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For those journeys be able to speak other languages gives the opportunity to really immerse in foreign cultures instead of just be a sightseeing tourist .


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I totally agree with the idea of young people should study a foreign language, because it's key to develop, in their future, their career as much as their personal life.


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