I arrived to London yesterday, . I hope to study English in London . I wished it Host familhosted my daughter’s school festival today W, we went to the there Iand it was very faun, I ate fly cheese and play thed mini games with family After we went home, I cooked for dinner . It was very good day today. I arrived to London yesterday. I hope to study English in London. I hosted my daughter’s school festival today, we went to the there and it was very fun, I ate fly cheese and played mini games with family After we went home, I cooked dinner. It was very good day today.

Quite a couple of mistakes. When making a new point like arriving to London and studying in London, you can relate them but in the sentence structure you made it would be better to make it a new sentence since they are two different points. There is also a mix of past and present tense quite often in this journal, I suggest you look through past, present and future tense to help you speak properly with the situation.