Oct. 10, 2020
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In my memory, since I started work, I am always afraid that I may get fired. Our leader always threatens us by firing us if we don't work hard. We once studied hard to get a job, and I think it would be really terrible if I got fired because of my slack off. So, to avoid getting fired, I always work hard. Later, I have to think about it seriously. If I really get fired, what can I do, and can do better than my current work? So I decided to learn some things to support my living as an alternative in case. Many years have passed, fortunately, I didn't get fired. But now, I'm not afraid of that anymore. Although I can't be fired, I still work hard because that is what I should do.
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In my memory,Ever since I started working, I amhave always been afraid that I mayo get fired.
Ever since I started working, I have always been afraid to get fired.
Our leader always threatens us bythat he will firinge us if we don't work hard.
Our leader always threatens that he will fire us if we don't work hard.
We onchave studied hard in order to get a job, and I think it would be really terrible if I got fired because of myfrom slacking off.
We have studied hard in order to get a job, and I think it would be really terrible if I got fired from slacking off.
So, to avoid getting fired, I always work hard.
Later, I have to think about it seriously.
If I reallydo get fired, what canwill I do,? and what can i do better than my current workjob?
If I do get fired, what will I do? and what can i do better than my current job?
So I have decided to learn somenew things to support my living as an alternativejust in case.
So I have decided to learn new things just in case.
Many years have passed, and fortunately, I didn't gethave not been fired.
Many years have passed, and fortunately I have not been fired.
ButAnd now, I'm not longer afraid of ithat anymore.
And now, I'm no longer afraid of it.
AlthoughEven if I cadon't beget fired, I still work hard because that is what I shouldthe right thing to do.
Even if I don't get fired, I still work hard because that is the right thing to do.
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Your writing is really improving. One suggestion, try to minimize your words. To be a good writer, every word must have a purpose. Do not use words that are not necessary.
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In my memory, since I started work, I am always afraid that I may get fired.
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Our leader always threatens us by firing us if we don't work hard.
Our leader always threatens |
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We once studied hard to get a job, and I think it would be really terrible if I got fired because of my slack off.
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So, to avoid getting fired, I always work hard. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Later, I have to think about it seriously. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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If I really get fired, what can I do, and can do better than my current work?
If I |
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So I decided to learn some things to support my living as an alternative in case.
So I have decided to learn |
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Many years have passed, fortunately, I didn't get fired.
Many years have passed, and fortunately |
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But now, I'm not afraid of that anymore.
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Although I can't be fired, I still work hard because that is what I should do.
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