He wasFor one moment he gigglinged in excitement, but the next moment he threw awayook down the robberies with a blow. For one moment he giggled in excitement, but the next moment he took down the robbers with a blow.

He was one momentFor a moment he was giggling in excitement, but the next moment he threw awaypunched the robberies with a blows so hard it sent them flying. For a moment he was giggling in excitement, but the next moment he punched the robbers so hard it sent them flying.

I can picture what "throw them away with a blow" looks like but we wouldn't say this in English. There's several ways to communicate the same image, so I picked one that came to mind as the correction.

This article perfectly contains a spoilers. This article contains spoilers.

This article perfectdefinitely contains a spoilers. This article definitely contains spoilers.

I watched Shazam onver the weekend. I watched Shazam over the weekend.

I watched Shazam on thelast weekend. I watched Shazam last weekend.

"on the weekend" sounds like every weekend, or next weekend. Instead you can say "last weekend", "this weekend" (if it's still Saturday or Sunday), or "over the weekend".

Honestly, I didn't look forward to it, but I found it very funny like a comedy. Honestly, I didn't look forward to it, but I found it very funny.

Honestly, I didwasn't looking forward to it, but I found it very funny. It felt like a comedy. Honestly, I wasn't looking forward to it, but I found it very funny. It felt like a comedy.

More natural wording

The rundown is like this.: The rundown is like this:

An old man whose named is Shazam has been looking for his successor. An old man named is Shazam has been looking for his successor.

This old manHe is a wizard and had siblings who, but they were all gone. He is a wizard and had siblings, but they were all gone.

This old man is the last survivingone who is still ailve. This old man is the last one who is still ailve.

This old man is the last survivingor among them. This old man is the last survivor among them.

His successor must be chosen a child with a beautiful mind. His successor must be a child with a beautiful mind.

HisThe successor must bhe choosens must be a child with a beautiful mind. The successor he chooses must be a child with a beautiful mind.

The old man has triested many children one by one to check if they had a beautiful minds. The old man has tested many children one by one to check if they had beautiful minds.

SayingWhen he said the word Shazam, Billy turned an adult man with a red costume like Superman. When he said the word Shazam, Billy turned an adult man with a red costume like Superman.

SBy saying Shazam, Billy turneds into an adult man with a red costume like Superman. By saying Shazam, Billy turns into an adult man with a red costume like Superman.

Present tense is better here. "Billy turned into an adult man[...]" = Sounds like it only happened once. The corrected sentence makes it sound like it's a part of him and he can do it over and over.

SayingWhen he says Shazam again, he turns back to a boy. When he says Shazam again, he turns back to a boy.

SayingWhen he says Shazam again, he turns back to a boy. When he says Shazam again, he turns back to a boy.

Yours was not wrong, but this is more natural wording

There is a funny scene to me is thatwhere Billy caomes across robberies at a shop. There is a funny scene where Billy comes across robberies at a shop.

The funny scene to me is thatA scene I thought was funny was when Billy came across a robberiesy at a shop. A scene I thought was funny was when Billy came across a robbery at a shop.

Billy was shot by the robberies around his bodys, but he was alsurvived. Billy was shot by the robbers, but he survived.

Billy was shot by the robberies around his bodys several times in the chest, but he was alive. Billy was shot by the robbers several times in the chest, but he was alive.

robber = 強盗の犯人, robbery = 強盗の事件 It seems in Japanese 強盗 can refer to the person and the event, but that is not the case in English.

Billy was so excited that he asked robberiesthem to shoot his face as well. Billy was so excited that he asked them to shoot his face as well.

Billy was so excited that he asked the robberies to shoot his face as well. Billy was so excited that he asked the robbers to shoot his face as well.

His body was covered with a red suits like Superman, but his face is without any coverwas not. His body was covered with a red suit like Superman, but his face was not.

His body was covered with a red suits like Superman, but his face is without anynot covered. His body was covered with a red suit like Superman, but his face is not covered.

This sounds a bit strange because I don't think Superman wears a mask :P

He wanted to know if the suits would saved him or not. He wanted to know if the suit would save him or not.

He wanted to know if the suits saved him or not. He wanted to know if the suit saved him or not.

The robbery shot his face many times without hesitation. The robber shot his face many times without hesitation.

The robberys shot his face many times without hesitation. The robbers shot his face many times without hesitation.

But Billy was still alive. But Billy was still alive.

IThat's certainly comedy.😂 That's certainly comedy.😂