.My city is Madinah. My city is Madinah.

.My city is Madinah.

It is in theMy city, Madinah, located in west ofern Saudi Arabia, is both holy and modern. My city, Madinah, located in western Saudi Arabia, is both holy and modern.

Try to combine some sentences instead of keeping many short sentences. Also, instead of "in the west of Saudi Arabia", it is better to say "western Saudi Arabia."

It is a holy and modern city.

There are many famous places, including the Al-Masjid An-Nabawi, along with many other historical sites. There are many famous places, including the Al-Masjid An-Nabawi, along with many other historical sites.

Once again, don't have very short sentences

There is Al-Masjid An-Nabawi is one such place, and there are also historical sites. Al-Masjid An-Nabawi is one such place, and there are also historical sites.

There is Al-Masjid An-Nabawi, and there are also historical sites.

Madinah is famous for dates and mint; they are very delicious and healthy. Madinah is famous for dates and mint; they are very delicious and healthy.

Here, a semicolon is used because the two sentences can be their own, but they are very small and look better together.

They are very delicious and healthy.

The population is largof Madinah is large, more than one million people. The population of Madinah is large, more than one million people.

It has more than one million people.