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Life is really ironic. When we were young, we didn't have much money, but that time was when we were starving of money. When we get old, we probably have a lot of money because of the whole life of savings, but at that age, we already don't need that much money. When we were young, we were full of energy, and we could do many great things, but at that time we could only have lower official positions, and we could hardly be leaders. With aging, we most likely become leaders in old age, but we have already lost the best time to be leaders because we are no longer as energetic as we were before. When we were young, we had plenty of time, but we didn't seem to make good use of it. Most of the time we just hung out and did nothing. When we realize that time is really precious and we should not waste it even just a bit, there is no longer much time for us because we are old already. So the ideal situation should be: young people should be leaders, should get a high salary, and should cherish time.

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Life is really ironic.

When we were young, we were full of energy, and we could do many great things, but at that time we could only have lower official positions, and we could hardly be leaders.

When we were young, we had plenty of time, but we didn't seem to make good use of it.

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Life is really ironic.

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Life is really ironic.


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When we were young, we didn't have much money, but that time was when we were starving of money.


When we were young, we didn't have much money, butactually during that time was when we were starving ofor money. When we were young, we didn't have much money, actually during that time we were starving for money.

When we were young, we didn't have much money, but that time was when we were starvinged of money. When we were young, we didn't have much money, but that time was when we were starved of money.

When we were young, we didn't have much money, but that time was when we were starving ofor money. When we were young, we didn't have much money, but that was when we were starving for money.

When we get old, we probably have a lot of money because of the whole life of savings, but at that age, we already don't need that much money.


When we get old, we probably have a lot of money because ofby then whole lifee have a lot of savings, but at that age, we already(actually sounds better) don't need that much money. When we get old, we probably have a lot of money because by then we have a lot of savings, but at that age, we (actually sounds better) don't need that much money.

When we get old, we probably have a lots of money because of the whole life of savings, but at that age, we already don't need that much money. When we get old, we probably have lots of money because of the whole life of savings, but at that age, we already don't need that much.

1. No problem here, just sounds a bit smoother in my opinion. 2. You used the word "money" earlier ("lots of money"), so you can drop it at the end.

When we get old, we probably have a lot of money because of thea whole life of savings, but at that age, we already don't need that much money. When we get old, we probably have a lot of money because of a whole life of savings, but at that age, we already don't need that much money.

When we were young, we were full of energy, and we could do many great things, but at that time we could only have lower official positions, and we could hardly be leaders.


When we were young, we were full of energy, and we could do many great things, but at that timethen we could only have lower official positions, and we could hardly be leaders. When we were young, we were full of energy, and we could do many great things, but then we could only have lower official positions, and we could hardly be leaders.

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With aging, we most likely become leaders in old age, but we have already lost the best time to be leaders because we are no longer as energetic as we were before.


With agingAs we fet olders, we most likely become leaders in old age(repetitive), but we have already lost the best time to be leaders because we are no longer as energetic as we were before. As we fet olders, we most likely become leaders (repetitive), but we have already lost the best time to be leaders because we are no longer as energetic as we were before.

WBut with aginge, we will most likely become leaders in old age, but we have already lost the best time to be leaders because we are no longer as energetic as we were before. But with age, we will most likely become leaders, but we have already lost the best time to be leaders because we are no longer as energetic as we were before.

No need to mention "age" twice.

With aging, we most likely will become leaders in old age, but we have alreadywill have lost the best time to be leaders because we are no longer as energetic as we were before. We most likely will become leaders in old age, but we will have lost the best time to be leaders because we are no longer as energetic as we were before.

When we were young, we had plenty of time, but we didn't seem to make good use of it.


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Most of the time we just hung out and did nothing.


Most of the time we just hung out with friends and did nothing. Most of the time we just hung out with friends and did nothing.

When we realize that time is really precious and we should not waste it even just a bit, there is no longer much time for us because we are old already.


When we realize that time is really precious and we should not waste it even just a bit, there is no longer much time left for us because we are old already. When we realize that time is really precious and we should not waste it even just a bit, there is no longer much time left for us because we are old already.

When we realize that time is really precious and we should not waste it even just a bit, there is no longer much time for us because we are old already. When we realize that time is really precious and we should not waste it even a bit, there is no longer much time for us because we are old already.

So the ideal situation should be: young people should be leaders, should get a high salary, and should cherish time.


So the ideal situation shwould be: young people should be leaders, should get a high salary, and should cherish time. So the ideal situation would be: young people should be leaders, should get a high salary, and should cherish time.

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