Feb. 10, 2021
Scalper Bots
The number of resellers have been increasing for the past several years. They use scalper bots that send notification to them soon after high demand products are available, and allow them to buy the products faster than others. Retailer are struggle to remove their accounts by verifying customer's identity, but it doesn't seem to work.
Last year, face masks disappeared from drugstores and convenience stores. Instead, we could find them sold at high price on the flea market apps. It found out that some people earn money by buying up them. Their behavior is really harmful and should be restricted. However, app developers hadn't deal with this issue at all until they got a lot of criticism.
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Scalper Bots
The number of resellers have been increasing for the past several years.
They use scalper bots that send notification to them soon after high demand products are available, and allow them to buy the products faster than others.
They use scalper bots that send notification to them soon after high demand products are available and allow them to buy the products faster than others.
, is not really needed here
Retailers are struggleing to remove their accounts by verifying customer's identity, but it doesn't seem to work.
Retailers are struggling to remove their accounts by verifying customer's identity, but it doesn't seem to work.
Last year, face masks disappeared from drugstores and convenience stores.
Instead, we could find them sold at high price on the flea market apps.
It found out that some people earn money by buying up them up.
I found out that some people earn money by buying them up.
Not quite sure here is you mean, you found out about it or if someone else?
Their behavior is really harmful and should be restricted.
However, aApp developers hadn'tve not been dealing with this issue at all until they gotreceive a lot of criticismomplaints.
App developers have not been dealing with this issue until they receive a lot of complaints.
present continuous tense (have ... been .. instead of past) sounds better here. I suggest replacing "criticism" with "complaints" because with complaints you are more obliged to do something about it.
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Feb. 13, 2021
Thank you for your correction.
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Scalper Bots This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The number of resellers have been increasing for the past several years. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They use scalper bots that send notification to them soon after high demand products are available, and allow them to buy the products faster than others.
They use scalper bots that send notification to them soon after high demand products are available , is not really needed here |
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Retailer are struggle to remove their accounts by verifying customer's identity, but it doesn't seem to work.
Retailers are struggl |
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Last year, face masks disappeared from drugstores and convenience stores. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Instead, we could find them sold at high price on the flea market apps. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It found out that some people earn money by buying up them.
I Not quite sure here is you mean, you found out about it or if someone else? |
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Their behavior is really harmful and should be restricted. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However, app developers hadn't deal with this issue at all until they got a lot of criticism.
present continuous tense (have ... been .. instead of past) sounds better here. I suggest replacing "criticism" with "complaints" because with complaints you are more obliged to do something about it. |
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