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learner

Jan. 2, 2020

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Owning a Car Nowadays

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In today's world, almost everyone needs a means of transportation to do our business. Cars and automobiles are one of the main methods used by many people. However, in my opinion, people have become less dependent on using them than before. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.

First of all, a wider range of transportation options have become available for people nowadays. A few decades ago in some cities, there were no busses, nor a metro system, so cars were the major way to travel across the city. As time passes, this have become less common, and more choices have become available. I have my own experience with this change. When I was kid, most of our society members had a car because no other options were available at that time. Cars were essentially the only choice to move through the city. About three years ago, busses and a metro system launched. Accordingly, we started using them and do not use our car anymore. A lot of people I know sold their cars.

Secondly, problem related to using a car made it a difficult choice for some people. There is a relatively high price to buy one and the gas money spent can be a lot. It also requires regular maintenance and special care to avoid the damage and failure. My personal experience with my old car was a compelling example of this. I bought a used car from friend. The car was cool at first, but it started having trouble afterwards. I lost my money fixing it and it still does not work well. After having a terrible time with it, I decided to sell it cheap just to save myself the trouble.

In conclusion, I feel that automobiles are no longer important to have, compared to before. People now have other alternatives to do the same task for them. Busses, metro services, and airplanes are suitable substitutes. As a result, owning a car has become less important to many people. Besides, some of them feel that fuel money and maintenance costs made it a difficult choice to afford.

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In today's world, almost everyone of us needs a means of transportation for doingto do our businesses.

Car and automobiles are one of the major/main methods used by many people.

In my opinion, however, people are becomeing more independent of usingfrom them than ever before.

I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.

First of all, much wider ranges of transportation have become available forto people nowadays.

In the lastA few decades ago, in some cities, there were no buses, neitheor a metro system, so cars wasere the major way of traveling across the city.

As thime time passes, this have shrunk downs become less prevalent, and more choices have become available.

I had my own experience onwith this.

When I was kid, most of our society members were havinghad a car because no other wayoption was available at that time.

Cars were essentially the only choice to motravel through the city.

About three year ago, buses and a metro system have launched.

Accordingly, we usedstarted using them and do not use our cars anymore.

A lot of people I know sold their cars.

"Car" is grammatically fine (it may even be gramatically preferred), but this is more natural.

Secondly, problems related to using a car made it a difficult choice for some people.

Starting from aThere's relatively high price to buy itone and the gas money spent on gas can be a lot.

It also requires regular maintenance and special care to avoid damage and failure.

My personal experiece with my old car was a compelling example of this.

I bought a used car from a friend.

The car was cool at first, but it startsed having trouble afterwards.

I lost lots of my money on fixing it and this eveneven this does not work well.

After terrible time with it, I decided to sell it cheap just to get my head ofsave myself the trouble.

In conclusion, I feel that automobilcars are no longer important as important to have them compared to before.

People now have other alternatives (to do the same task for them).

Buses, metro services, and airplanes are suitable substitutes.

As a result, owning a car haves become less important to many people.

bBesides, some of them feel that fuelgas money and maintenance costs made ait difficult choice to afford.

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learner

Jan. 5, 2020

11

Thanks a lot, Sasha, for your continuous help and correction! I appreciate your time and effort.

Owning a Car Nowadays

In today's world, almost everyone of us needs a means of transportation for doingto do our businesses.

Car ands or automobiles are one of the major methods used by many people.

IHowever, in my opinion, however, people have become more inless dependent ofn using them than before.

I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.

First of all, mucha wider ranges of transportation options have become available for people nowadays.

In the last few decades, in some cities, there were no buses, neitheor a metro system, so cars was the major way tof traveling across the city.

As the time passes, this haves shrunk down, and more choices have become available.

I hadve my own experience onwith this. change

When I was kid, most of our society members were havingpeople had a car because no other way was available at that time.

Cars were essentially the only choice to move through the city.

About three year ago, buses and a metro system have launched.

Accordingly, we used them and do not use our cars anymore.

A lot of people I know sold their cars.

Secondly, problems related to using a car made it a difficult choice for some people.

Starting from a relatively high price to buy it and the gas money spent.

It also requires regular maintenance and special care to avoid damage and failure.

My personal experiece with my old car was a compelling example of this.

I bought a used car from a friend.

The car was cool at first, but it startsed having trouble afterwards.

I lost lots of my money on fixing it and this even does noeven then it didn't work well.

After having a terrible time with it, I decided to sell it cheaply just to get my head ofnot have to deal with the trouble.

In conclusion, I feel that automobiles are no longer important to have them, compared to before.

People now have other alternatives to do the same task for them.

Buses, metro service, and airplanes are suitable substitutes.

As a result, owning a car haves become less important to many people.

besides, some of them feel that fuel money and maintenance costs made it a difficult choice to afford.

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learner

Jan. 5, 2020

11

Thank you for reading this little long essay :) I will make sure to avoid these mistakes in the future.

Owning a Car Nowadays

In today's world, almost every one of us needs a means of transportation for doconducting our businesses.

Car and automobile are one of the major methods used by many people.

I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.

First of all, much wider ranges of transportation have become available for people nowadays.

In the last few decades, in some cities, there were noeither buses, neitheor a metro system, so cars was the majorprimary way of traveling across the city.

As the time passes, this have shrunk dows become less common, and more choice have become available.

I had my own experience onwith this.

When I was kid, most of our society members were havinghad a car because no other waytransportation was available at that time.

About three year ago, buses and metro system have launched.

A lot of people I know sold their car.

Secondly, problems related to using a car made it a difficult choice for some people.

Starting from a relatively high price to buy itFirst of all, the price to buy it is relatively high and the gas money spent can be a lot.

It also requires regular maintenance and special care to avoid damage and failure.

My personal experiece with my old car was a compelling example of this.

I bought a used car from a friend.

The car was cool at first, but it startsed having trouble afterwards.

I lost lots of my money on fixing it and this evenit still does not work well.

After terrible time with it, I decided to sell it cheap just to get my head ofsave myself the trouble.

In conclusion, I feel that the automobile is no longer important to have them compared to before.

People now have other alternatives to do same task for them.

Buses, metro service, and airplanes are suitable substitutes.

As a result, owning a car haves become less important to many people.

bBesides, some of them feel that fuel money and maintenance costs made it a difficult choice to afford.

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learner

Jan. 5, 2020

11

Thank you for your time and help, I appreciate it.

Owning a Car Nowadays


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In today's world, almost everyone of us needs a mean of transportation for doing our businesses.


In today's world, almost every one of us needs a means of transportation for doconducting our businesses.

In today's world, almost everyone of us needs a means of transportation for doingto do our businesses.

In today's world, almost everyone of us needs a means of transportation for doingto do our businesses.

Car and automobile are one of the major methods used by many people.


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Car ands or automobiles are one of the major methods used by many people.

Car and automobiles are one of the major/main methods used by many people.

In my opinion, however, people become more independent of using them than before.


IHowever, in my opinion, however, people have become more inless dependent ofn using them than before.

In my opinion, however, people are becomeing more independent of usingfrom them than ever before.

I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.


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First of all, much wider ranges of transportation have become available for people nowadays.


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First of all, mucha wider ranges of transportation options have become available for people nowadays.

First of all, much wider ranges of transportation have become available forto people nowadays.

In the last few decades, in some cities, there were no buses, neither a metro system, so cars was the major way of traveling across the city.


In the last few decades, in some cities, there were noeither buses, neitheor a metro system, so cars was the majorprimary way of traveling across the city.

In the last few decades, in some cities, there were no buses, neitheor a metro system, so cars was the major way tof traveling across the city.

In the lastA few decades ago, in some cities, there were no buses, neitheor a metro system, so cars wasere the major way of traveling across the city.

As the time passes, this have shrunk down, and more choice have become available.


As the time passes, this have shrunk dows become less common, and more choice have become available.

As the time passes, this haves shrunk down, and more choices have become available.

As thime time passes, this have shrunk downs become less prevalent, and more choices have become available.

I had my own experience on this.


I had my own experience onwith this.

I hadve my own experience onwith this. change

I had my own experience onwith this.

When I was kid, most of our society members were having a car because no other way was available at that time.


When I was kid, most of our society members were havinghad a car because no other waytransportation was available at that time.

When I was kid, most of our society members were havingpeople had a car because no other way was available at that time.

When I was kid, most of our society members were havinghad a car because no other wayoption was available at that time.

Cars were essentially the only choice to move through the city.


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Cars were essentially the only choice to motravel through the city.

About three year ago, buses and metro system have launched.


About three year ago, buses and metro system have launched.

About three year ago, buses and a metro system have launched.

About three year ago, buses and a metro system have launched.

Accordingly, we used them and do not use our cars anymore.


Accordingly, we used them and do not use our cars anymore.

Accordingly, we usedstarted using them and do not use our cars anymore.

A lot of people I know sold their car.


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A lot of people I know sold their cars.

A lot of people I know sold their cars.

"Car" is grammatically fine (it may even be gramatically preferred), but this is more natural.

Secondly, problems related to using a car made a difficult choice for some people.


Secondly, problems related to using a car made it a difficult choice for some people.

Secondly, problems related to using a car made it a difficult choice for some people.

Secondly, problems related to using a car made it a difficult choice for some people.

Starting from a relatively high price to buy it and the gas money spent.


Starting from a relatively high price to buy itFirst of all, the price to buy it is relatively high and the gas money spent can be a lot.

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Starting from aThere's relatively high price to buy itone and the gas money spent on gas can be a lot.

It also requires regular maintenance and special care to avoid damage and failure.


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My personal experiece with my old car was a compelling example of this.


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I bought a used car from a friend.


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The car was cool at first, but it starts having trouble afterwards.


The car was cool at first, but it startsed having trouble afterwards.

The car was cool at first, but it startsed having trouble afterwards.

The car was cool at first, but it startsed having trouble afterwards.

I lost lots of my money on fixing it and this even does not work well.


I lost lots of my money on fixing it and this evenit still does not work well.

I lost lots of my money on fixing it and this even does noeven then it didn't work well.

I lost lots of my money on fixing it and this eveneven this does not work well.

After terrible time with it, I decided to sell it cheap just to get my head of trouble.


After terrible time with it, I decided to sell it cheap just to get my head ofsave myself the trouble.

After having a terrible time with it, I decided to sell it cheaply just to get my head ofnot have to deal with the trouble.

After terrible time with it, I decided to sell it cheap just to get my head ofsave myself the trouble.

In conclusion, I feel that automobile no longer important to have them compared to before.


In conclusion, I feel that the automobile is no longer important to have them compared to before.

In conclusion, I feel that automobiles are no longer important to have them, compared to before.

In conclusion, I feel that automobilcars are no longer important as important to have them compared to before.

People now have other alternatives to do same task for them.


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People now have other alternatives to do the same task for them.

People now have other alternatives (to do the same task for them).

Buses, metro service, and airplanes are suitable substitutes.


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Buses, metro service, and airplanes are suitable substitutes.

Buses, metro services, and airplanes are suitable substitutes.

As a result, owning a car have become less important to many people.


As a result, owning a car haves become less important to many people.

As a result, owning a car haves become less important to many people.

As a result, owning a car haves become less important to many people.

besides, some of them feel that fuel money and maintenance costs made a difficult choice to afford.


bBesides, some of them feel that fuel money and maintenance costs made it a difficult choice to afford.

besides, some of them feel that fuel money and maintenance costs made it a difficult choice to afford.

bBesides, some of them feel that fuelgas money and maintenance costs made ait difficult choice to afford.

[Corrected Version]In today's world, almost everyone needs a means of transportation to do our business.


Cars and automobiles are one of the main methods used by many people.


However, in my opinion, people have become less dependent on using them than before.


First of all, a wider range of transportation options have become available for people nowadays.


A few decades ago in some cities, there were no busses, nor a metro system, so cars were the major way to travel across the city.


As time passes, this have become less common, and more choices have become available.


I have my own experience with this change.


When I was kid, most of our society members had a car because no other options were available at that time.


About three years ago, busses and a metro system launched.


Accordingly, we started using them and do not use our car anymore.


A lot of people I know sold their cars.


Secondly, problem related to using a car made it a difficult choice for some people.


There is a relatively high price to buy one and the gas money spent can be a lot.


It also requires regular maintenance and special care to avoid the damage and failure.


My personal experience with my old car was a compelling example of this.


I bought a used car from friend.


The car was cool at first, but it started having trouble afterwards.


I lost my money fixing it and it still does not work well.


After having a terrible time with it, I decided to sell it cheap just to save myself the trouble.


In conclusion, I feel that automobiles are no longer important to have, compared to before.


People now have other alternatives to do the same task for them.


Busses, metro services, and airplanes are suitable substitutes.


As a result, owning a car has become less important to many people.


Besides, some of them feel that fuel money and maintenance costs made it a difficult choice to afford.


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