Dec. 3, 2020
My family have had a field for about 100 years. My grandmother lived there when she was a young, my mother and her brothers and sister enjoyed theirs firts years there too.
When I was a child I don't like to visit the field because I felt bored.
Now I love to visit it, near our house there are four old and big trees, my family enjoy this place becuase it is quite, there are two forest with autochthonous trees and while you walk you can see birds and little animals, but I realy love this place becuase I belive that my granmother's sprits live there.
I think my happy remeberings there are my favorite places.
My favorite place
My family haves had a field for about 100 years.
My family has had a field for about 100 years.
I believe "my family have had" may be correct in British English, though. But not in American English.
My grandmother lived there when she was a young, m. My mother and her brothers and sister enjoyed theirs firtst years there, too.
My grandmother lived there when she was young. My mother and her brothers and sister enjoyed their first years there, too.
When I was a child, I doidn't like to visit the field because I felt bored.
When I was a child, I didn't like to visit the field because I felt bored.
Now I love to visit it, n. Near our house, there are four old and big trees, m. My family enjoys this place becuause it is quite, tet. There are two forests with autochthoindigenous trees and while you walk you can see birds and little animals, but. I really love this place becuause I believe that my grandmother's spirits lives there.
Now I love to visit it. Near our house, there are four old and big trees. My family enjoys this place because it is quiet. There are two forests with indigenous trees and while you walk you can see birds and little animals. I really love this place because I believe that my grandmother's spirit lives there.
"Autochthonous" might be right in British English, but I speak American English and I have never heard of this...
I think my happy remeberings there arememories there make it one of my favorite places.
I think my happy memories there make it one of my favorite places.
My favorite place
My family have had a field for about 100 years.
My grandmother lived there when she was a young, m. My mother and , her brothers and sister enjoyed theirs firtst years of life there too.
My grandmother lived there when she was young. My mother, her brothers and sister enjoyed their first years of life there too.
When I was a child, I doidn't like to visiting the field because I felt bored.
When I was a child, I didn't like visiting the field because I felt bored.
Now I love to visit it, n. Near our house, there are four old and bigbig old trees, m. My family enjoys this place becuause it is quite,et and there are two forests with autochthonous trees, and while you walkare walking, you can see birds and little animals, b. But I really love this place becuause I believe that my grandmother's spirits lives there.
Now I love to visit it. Near our house, there are four big old trees. My family enjoys this place because it is quiet and there are two forests with autochthonous trees, and while you are walking, you can see birds and little animals. But I really love this place because I believe that my grandmother's spirit lives there.
I think my happy remeberingsiest memories are there are, in my favorite places.
I think my happiest memories are there, in my favorite places.
My apologies if I misunderstood the meaning of this sentence! But anyhow, I think it sounds better like this. :)
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A few small mistakes, some errors of style. But overall, great work. :) Your family's land sounds like a nice place for relaxing and spending time in nature!
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Now I love to visit it, near our house there are four old and big trees, my family enjoy this place becuase it is quite, there are two forest with autochthonous trees and while you walk you can see birds and little animals, but I realy love this place becuase I belive that my granmother's sprits live there.
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I think my happy remeberings there are my favorite places.
I think my happ My apologies if I misunderstood the meaning of this sentence! But anyhow, I think it sounds better like this. :)
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