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kiwy

Sept. 13, 2021

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Overwhelming

It seems that my life is being overwhelmed by work. What I wrote recently were all about work, no matter in Chinese or English.
It seems that I only have twelve daytime classes and two nightclasses is quite relax, I have enough private time to do my personal business. But there are a lot of work need to be done by the teacher in charge of the class.
I delt with a complaint from a parent of another class. The parent complained that his son was threatened my one of my students, so he wanted to figure out what had happed. He was so rude and unpunctual that I didn't like him at all. I blamed him for appearing without noticing and at the wrong timing when all students all dismissed. He said he would show up again in the evening. I didn't have night class today, and I had made a study plan. It was all disorganized. And I hated it a lot but couldn't do nothing.

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Overwhelming

It seems that my life is being overwhelmed by work.

What I wroThe journals I have written recently were all about work, no matter whether they were in Chinese or English.

It seems that Imight seem as if only haveing twelve daytime classes and two nightclasses iswould be quite relax,ing. I have enough private time to do my personal business.

What do you mean by 12 daytime classes and 2 nighttime classes?

But there are a lot of work need to be done by the teacher in charge of the classresponsibilities to be managed by the teacher.

I dealt with a complaint from a parent ofin another class.

The parent complained that his son was threatened mby one of my students, so he wanted to figure out what had happened.

He was so rude and unpunctualabrupt that I didn't like him at all.

'Not punctual' would mean that he was often late.

I blamcalled him out for appearing without noticinge and at the wrong timinge, when all students allhad been dismissed.

He said he would show up again in the evening.

I didn't have night class today, and I had made a study plan.

It was all disorganized.

And I hated it a lot but couldn't do noanything.

Often, double negatives like 'couldn't do nothing' are used very informally/can often characterize a rural accent.

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Nice work! Hope everything goes well with him and school. Virtual hug!

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kiwy

Sept. 15, 2021

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It seems that Imight seem as if only haveing twelve daytime classes and two nightclasses iswould be quite relax,ing. I have enough private time to do my personal business.

Middle school students have to have classes in the eveing, which there were no teaching but they can do homework. But there must be a teacher in every class to help with their study and principles of class.

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sivanc

Sept. 15, 2021

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Middle school students have to have classes in the eveing, which there were no teaching but they can do homework. But there must be a teacher in every class to help with their study and principles of class.

But do you really teach 12 periods during the day? How long is one class? Just trying to figure out the logistics.

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kiwy

Sept. 16, 2021

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But do you really teach 12 periods during the day? How long is one class? Just trying to figure out the logistics.

Oh, I forgot to note that I have 12 class a week, a class is 45 minutes long.

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sivanc

Sept. 16, 2021

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Oh, I forgot to note that I have 12 class a week, a class is 45 minutes long.

Oh, okay, then I might say "It might seem as if teaching only 12 daytime periods and 2 night classes a week..."

Overwhelming


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It seems that my life is being overwhelmed by work.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

What I wrote recently were all about work, no matter in Chinese or English.


What I wroThe journals I have written recently were all about work, no matter whether they were in Chinese or English.

It seems that I only have twelve daytime classes and two nightclasses is quite relax, I have enough private time to do my personal business.


It seems that Imight seem as if only haveing twelve daytime classes and two nightclasses iswould be quite relax,ing. I have enough private time to do my personal business.

What do you mean by 12 daytime classes and 2 nighttime classes?

But there are a lot of work need to be done by the teacher in charge of the class.


But there are a lot of work need to be done by the teacher in charge of the classresponsibilities to be managed by the teacher.

I delt with a complaint from a parent of another class.


I dealt with a complaint from a parent ofin another class.

The parent complained that his son was threatened my one of my students, so he wanted to figure out what had happed.


The parent complained that his son was threatened mby one of my students, so he wanted to figure out what had happened.

He was so rude and unpunctual that I didn't like him at all.


He was so rude and unpunctualabrupt that I didn't like him at all.

'Not punctual' would mean that he was often late.

I blamed him for appearing without noticing and at the wrong timing when all students all dismissed.


I blamcalled him out for appearing without noticinge and at the wrong timinge, when all students allhad been dismissed.

He said he would show up again in the evening.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I didn't have night class today, and I had made a study plan.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It was all disorganized.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

And I hated it a lot but couldn't do nothing.


And I hated it a lot but couldn't do noanything.

Often, double negatives like 'couldn't do nothing' are used very informally/can often characterize a rural accent.

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