July 2, 2021
Overcoming Awkwardness
Several days ago, one of my friends became depressed suddenly when we were talking with each other.
I was so confused and awkward that I didn't know which words had stimulated him and what to do.
Then I decided to go home because it seemed that I had to leave him alone.
However on the next day, he confessed it was not my fault and why he sometimes becomes like that.
I was really surprised at that, but also I appreciated his confess.
To get along better with him, I want to spend more time with him.
Overcoming Awkwardness
Several days ago, one of my friends suddenly became depressed suddenly when we were talking with each otherin the middle of our conversation.
It was very awkward. I was so confused and awkward that I didn't know which words had stimulated him andwasn't sure what I've said to upset him. I didn't know what to do.
Then I decided to go home because it seemed that I had to leave him alonIt seemed he wanted to be alone so I decided to go home.
However on tThe next day, he confessed it was not my fault and explained why he is sometimes becomes like that.
I was really surprised at that, but also Ibut appreciated his confession.
To get along better with him, I want to spend more time with him so we can get along better.
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Very good! Your sentence structures are awkward at times but I knew exactly what you're trying to say.
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Several days ago, one of my friends became depressed suddenly when we were talking with each other. Several days ago, one of my friends suddenly became depressed |
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I was so confused and awkward that I didn't know which words had stimulated him and what to do. It was very awkward. I was so confused and |
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Then I decided to go home because it seemed that I had to leave him alone.
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However on the next day, he confessed it was not my fault and why he sometimes becomes like that.
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I was really surprised at that, but also I appreciated his confess. I was really surprised |
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To get along better with him, I want to spend more time with him.
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