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serhan

Jan. 8, 2023

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Outstanding Invoices

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According to the e-mail coming from the accountant, we have to calculate an additional tax as Intercompany Clients have not paid our outstanding invoices for a long time. As you know I am pushing some of them to collect the payment but they did not even give me a response.

Therefore, in order not to pay meaningless tax in 2023, please help me out to find a way to collect payments for outstanding invoices. If we received the payments in time, we would not calculate and not pay these taxes.

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Outstanding Invoices

Hi

According to the e-mail coming from the accountant, we have to calculate an additional tax as Intercompany Clients have not paid our outstanding invoices for a long time.

As you know I am pushing some of them to collect the payment but they did not even give me a responsed.

Therefore, in order not to pay meaningless tax in 2023, please help me out to find a way to collect payments for these outstanding invoices.

If we received the payments in time, we would not have to calculate and not pay these taxes.

Outstanding Invoices

Hiello,

Since this is a formal letter, we avoid using "Hi."

According to the e-mail coming from theour accountant, we have to calculate an additional tax asfor Intercompany Cclients who have not paid our outstanding invoices for a long time.

As you know, I am pushing some of them to collect the payment but they did not even give me a response.

Therefore, in order to not to pay meaningless taxes in 2023, please help me out to find a way to collect payments for outstanding invoices.

If we received the payments ion time, we would not have to calculate and not pay these taxes.

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Good work and good luck!

Outstanding Invoices

Hi

"Hello" is more formal (external emails), "Hey" is more common and better for internal emails. "Hi" sounds short and cold on its own in an email.

According to the e-mail coming from the accountant, we have to calculate an additional tax as Intercompany Clients have not paid our outstanding invoices for a long time.

This is fine but "According to the accountant's email," sounds more natural.

As you know I am pushing some of them to collect the payment but they did not even give me a response.

Or "to pay the invoices".

Therefore, in order not to pay meaninglessunnecessary taxes in 2023, please help me out to find a way to collect payments for the outstanding invoices.

If we had received the payments ion time, we would not calculate and not need to pay these taxes.

"We would not calculate" bunu anlamadım.

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serhan

Jan. 8, 2023

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If we had received the payments ion time, we would not calculate and not need to pay these taxes.

"we would not calculate the taxes and would not pay these taxes" demek istedim.

"Vergileri hesaplamazdık ve bu vergileri ödemezdik"

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aedw

Jan. 8, 2023

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"we would not calculate the taxes and would not pay these taxes" demek istedim. "Vergileri hesaplamazdık ve bu vergileri ödemezdik"

OK thanks, you can say:

"If we had received the payments on time, we wouldn't have had to factor in and pay these taxes".

Outstanding Invoices

Hi

"Hello" might be better as it is more formal.

According to thean e-mail coming from the accountant, we have to calculate an additional tax as Iintercompany Cclients have not paid our outstanding invoices for a long time.

As you know, I am pushing some of them to collect the paymentpay but they didhave not even given me a response.

Therefore, in order not to pay a meaningless tax in 2023, please help me out to find a way to collect payments for outstanding invoices.

If we received the payments in time, we would notill not need calculate and not pay these taxes.

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Great writing! :)

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serhan

Jan. 8, 2023

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As you know, I am pushing some of them to collect the paymentpay but they didhave not even given me a response.

Following sentecen is correct?
"As you know I am pushing some of them to get the invoices paid but they have not given me a response."

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Grace14

Jan. 8, 2023

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Following sentecen is correct? "As you know I am pushing some of them to get the invoices paid but they have not given me a response."

Yep! That's a good sentence :)

Outstanding Invoices


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Hi

"Hello" might be better as it is more formal.

Hi

"Hello" is more formal (external emails), "Hey" is more common and better for internal emails. "Hi" sounds short and cold on its own in an email.

Hiello,

Since this is a formal letter, we avoid using "Hi."

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

According to the e-mail coming from the accountant, we have to calculate an additional tax as Intercompany Clients have not paid our outstanding invoices for a long time.


According to thean e-mail coming from the accountant, we have to calculate an additional tax as Iintercompany Cclients have not paid our outstanding invoices for a long time.

According to the e-mail coming from the accountant, we have to calculate an additional tax as Intercompany Clients have not paid our outstanding invoices for a long time.

This is fine but "According to the accountant's email," sounds more natural.

According to the e-mail coming from theour accountant, we have to calculate an additional tax asfor Intercompany Cclients who have not paid our outstanding invoices for a long time.

According to the e-mail coming from the accountant, we have to calculate an additional tax as Intercompany Clients have not paid our outstanding invoices for a long time.

As you know I am pushing some of them to collect the payment but they did not even give me a response.


As you know, I am pushing some of them to collect the paymentpay but they didhave not even given me a response.

As you know I am pushing some of them to collect the payment but they did not even give me a response.

Or "to pay the invoices".

As you know, I am pushing some of them to collect the payment but they did not even give me a response.

As you know I am pushing some of them to collect the payment but they did not even give me a responsed.

Therefore, in order not to pay meaningless tax in 2023, please help me out to find a way to collect payments for outstanding invoices.


Therefore, in order not to pay a meaningless tax in 2023, please help me out to find a way to collect payments for outstanding invoices.

Therefore, in order not to pay meaninglessunnecessary taxes in 2023, please help me out to find a way to collect payments for the outstanding invoices.

Therefore, in order to not to pay meaningless taxes in 2023, please help me out to find a way to collect payments for outstanding invoices.

Therefore, in order not to pay meaningless tax in 2023, please help me out to find a way to collect payments for these outstanding invoices.

If we received the payments in time, we would not calculate and not pay these taxes.


If we received the payments in time, we would notill not need calculate and not pay these taxes.

If we had received the payments ion time, we would not calculate and not need to pay these taxes.

"We would not calculate" bunu anlamadım.

If we received the payments ion time, we would not have to calculate and not pay these taxes.

If we received the payments in time, we would not have to calculate and not pay these taxes.

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