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NavidRostami

Sept. 2, 2022

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Outdoor activities

Definitely. Hardly could you find someone who doesn’t like doing outdoor activities. Had you found people who do not exercise, be sure that they are lazy people. I think outdoor activities do wonders for our mental and physical health. I spend my leisure time doing workouts or maybe jogging.
Well, my number one hobby is going to the gym. Should I'm not like those who exercise and get injured, you can be sure that I'll be playing more sports like football or badminton. Although I am really into swimming, I couldn’t do it because I am kind of a sensitive skin type. Not only are all kind of sports good for my health, but it also helps me get in shape and look awesome.
Usually every day. Hardly could you have found me not workout in the gym in the afternoon. I got too motivated when I do workouts. However, I try to rest Friday and do something like jogging or walking in the countryside.
You know, Sports are particularly popular nowadays, as keeping fit is becoming more demanding. Hardly could you find someone happy without doing outdoor activities. Probably jogging, going to the gym and yoga are popular outdoor activities in my country. You can easily catch sight of a group of people from all walks of life jogging every morning or in the evening or maybe at night.

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Outdoor activities

Definitely.

I think outdoor activities do wonders for our mental and physical health.

I spend my leisure time doing workouts or maybe jogging.

Well, my number one hobby is going to the gym.

Not only are all kind of sports good for my health, but it also helps me get in shape and look awesome.

Usually every day.

Outdoor activities

Definitely.

It doesn't make sense to start a paragraph with a one word sentence of the word "definitely".

Hardly could you find someone who doesn’tMost people like doing outdoor activities ...

Yours is correct but it sounds very formal.

Had you found people who do not exercise, be sure that they are lazy people... and those who don't are all lazy.

Again, technically correct but much more complicated than needs be.

I think outdoor activities do wonders for our mental and physical health.

I spend my leisure time doing workouts or maybe jogging.

Well, mMy number one hobby is going to the gym.

The "Well" makes it sound like you're responding to someone's question.

Should I'm not like those who exercise and get injured, so you can be sure that I'll be playing more sports like football or badminton.

Although I am really into swimming, I couldn’an't do it because I am kind of ahave sensitive skin type.

Not only are all kind of sports good for my health, but it also helps me get in shape and look awesome.

Usually every day.

Hardly could you have found me not workoutYou'll usually find me in the gym in the afternoon.

I goet tooreally motivated when I do workouts.

Hardly could you find someone happy withouA happy person who doesn't doing outdoor activities is hard to find.

If you want to describe something as hard to find, this way is more natural.

Probably jJogging, going to the gym and yoga are popular outdoor activities in my country.

You are from your country, you don't need to say probably because you know.

You can easily catch sight of a groups of people from all walks of life jogging every morning or in the evening or maybe at nightat all hours of the day.

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Definitely.


Definitely.

It doesn't make sense to start a paragraph with a one word sentence of the word "definitely".

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Hardly could you find someone who doesn’t like doing outdoor activities.


Hardly could you find someone who doesn’tMost people like doing outdoor activities ...

Yours is correct but it sounds very formal.

Had you found people who do not exercise, be sure that they are lazy people.


Had you found people who do not exercise, be sure that they are lazy people... and those who don't are all lazy.

Again, technically correct but much more complicated than needs be.

I think outdoor activities do wonders for our mental and physical health.


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I spend my leisure time doing workouts or maybe jogging.


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Well, my number one hobby is going to the gym.


Well, mMy number one hobby is going to the gym.

The "Well" makes it sound like you're responding to someone's question.

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Should I'm not like those who exercise and get injured, you can be sure that I'll be playing more sports like football or badminton.


Should I'm not like those who exercise and get injured, so you can be sure that I'll be playing more sports like football or badminton.

Although I am really into swimming, I couldn’t do it because I am kind of a sensitive skin type.


Although I am really into swimming, I couldn’an't do it because I am kind of ahave sensitive skin type.

Not only are all kind of sports good for my health, but it also helps me get in shape and look awesome.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Usually every day.


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Hardly could you have found me not workout in the gym in the afternoon.


Hardly could you have found me not workoutYou'll usually find me in the gym in the afternoon.

I got too motivated when I do workouts.


I goet tooreally motivated when I do workouts.

However, I try to rest Friday and do something like jogging or walking in the countryside.


You know, Sports are particularly popular nowadays, as keeping fit is becoming more demanding.


Hardly could you find someone happy without doing outdoor activities.


Hardly could you find someone happy withouA happy person who doesn't doing outdoor activities is hard to find.

If you want to describe something as hard to find, this way is more natural.

Probably jogging, going to the gym and yoga are popular outdoor activities in my country.


Probably jJogging, going to the gym and yoga are popular outdoor activities in my country.

You are from your country, you don't need to say probably because you know.

You can easily catch sight of a group of people from all walks of life jogging every morning or in the evening or maybe at night.


You can easily catch sight of a groups of people from all walks of life jogging every morning or in the evening or maybe at nightat all hours of the day.

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