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Out of school courses
I am accompanying my daughter with her out-school math course. I'm sitting in the back of the classroom and listening to the math teacher(On the other side,I'm writing this diary ^_^). I feel as if I have gone back to my student days.
I am accompanying my daughter with her out-of-school math course.
The "fancy word" for "out-of-school" is "extra-curricular"
I'm sitting in the back of the classroom and listening to the math teacher (On the other side, I'm writing this diary ^_^).
Since you are "listening" WHILE you are "sitting in the classroom," it makes more sense to omit the "and". Using "and" makes the 2 actions sound a little bit like they are unrelated.
You could also just use "while" instead of "and", but it's not necessary.
I feel as if I have gone back to my student days.
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Great job! Other than missing a few "spaces," you didn't really make any mistakes.
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We accompany someone TO an event, a location, etc.
We go somewhere WITH someone.
I am accompanying my daughter to her extracurricular math course.
I'm with my daughter at her extracurricular math course.
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Out of school courses |
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I am accompanying my daughter with her out-school math course. I am accompanying my daughter with her out-of-school math course. The "fancy word" for "out-of-school" is "extra-curricular" |
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I'm sitting in the back of the classroom and listening to the math teacher(On the other side,I'm writing this diary ^_^). I'm sitting in the back of the classroom Since you are "listening" WHILE you are "sitting in the classroom," it makes more sense to omit the "and". Using "and" makes the 2 actions sound a little bit like they are unrelated. You could also just use "while" instead of "and", but it's not necessary. |
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