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Ducky

Jan. 4, 2022

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Our World and the Maths

It is a good question, but I don't know which is the good answer. I think the maths are in the nature because for instance, we observer that the planets are rounds and they have an area and a volume. By gravity, an apple is attracted by Earth with an aceleration. If we know the initial datas, then we can calculate how many time the apple will take to arrive on the ground. Fibonanci serie is very common in the nature, too. Water can be as ice, liquid or gas, all them with a several volum. If there are variables, then we can measure and working this datas with the maths.
What I want say is the math suround us. We will create the tools that we need to understand the world through the maths. When will be necessary, we will invent a new math tool to follow understand this world.

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Our World and the Maths

Math is singular in English, but Mathematics is plural - you could also write "Our World and Mathematics"

It is a good question, but I don't know what is the goodright answer is.

Alternatively, if you want to use the word good: "It is a good question, but I don't know what a good answer would be."

This is a slightly confusing first sentence because it's unclear what the question is.

I think the maths are in themath is in nature because, for instance, we observer that the planets are rounds and they have an area and a volume.

Math and nature don't need an article.

Byecause of gravity, an apple is attracted byto Earth with an acceleration.

If we know the initial datas, then we can calculate how manyuch time the apple will take to arrive onreach the ground.

Data is singular in English

The Fibonancci seriquence is very common in the nature, too.

Water can bexist as ice, liquid, or gas, all them with a severaleach with different volumes.

Alternatively "Water can exist as solid, liquid, or gas, each with different volumes."

If there are variables, then we can measure and working with this datas with the using maths.

What I want say is theat math surrounds us.

We will create the tools that we need to understand the world through the maths.

When it will be necessary, we will invent a new math tool to follow understand this world.

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Great job, and an interesting perspective :)

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Ducky

Jan. 5, 2022

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Thanks for corrects and feedbacks.

Our World and the Maths


Our World and the Maths

Math is singular in English, but Mathematics is plural - you could also write "Our World and Mathematics"

It is a good question, but I don't know what is the good answer.


It is a good question, but I don't know what is the goodright answer is.

Alternatively, if you want to use the word good: "It is a good question, but I don't know what a good answer would be." This is a slightly confusing first sentence because it's unclear what the question is.

I think the maths are in the nature because for instance, we observer that the planets are rounds and they have an area and a volume.


I think the maths are in themath is in nature because, for instance, we observer that the planets are rounds and they have an area and a volume.

Math and nature don't need an article.

By gravity, an apple is attracted by Earth with an aceleration.


Byecause of gravity, an apple is attracted byto Earth with an acceleration.

If we know the initial datas, then we can calculate how many time the apple will take to arrive on the ground.


If we know the initial datas, then we can calculate how manyuch time the apple will take to arrive onreach the ground.

Data is singular in English

Fibonanci serie is very common in the nature, too.


The Fibonancci seriquence is very common in the nature, too.

Water can be as ice, liquid or gas, all them with a several volum.


Water can bexist as ice, liquid, or gas, all them with a severaleach with different volumes.

Alternatively "Water can exist as solid, liquid, or gas, each with different volumes."

If there are variables, then we can measure and working this datas with the maths.


If there are variables, then we can measure and working with this datas with the using maths.

What I want say is the math suround us.


What I want say is theat math surrounds us.

We will create the tools that we need to understand the world through the maths.


We will create the tools that we need to understand the world through the maths.

When will be necessary, we will invent a new math tool to follow understand this world.


When it will be necessary, we will invent a new math tool to follow understand this world.

It is a good question, but I don't know which is the good answer.


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