Sept. 20, 2022
our house
I like our house with all the amazing things. We have a big kitchen with a giant oven and a frigdge with ice cream bar and ice maschine for the drinks. Our living room is giant with a samsung television with a popcorn maschine. It gives two bathrooms one is with the toilet the other not. The first bathroom have giant wal and a hand/hair dryer. The twiece bathroom have the toilet with two massage- chairs. Our bedrooms are so one for the girls me and my little sister and one room for the boys my brothers. My parents sleep naturally together our bedroom is the biggest in the house. The bedroom of us children have double beds a table and a cupboard for our clothes. We have also a balcon with a great view. With garden full with all possible plans and flowers with a crystal blue sea and trampolin.
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I like our house with all theof its amazing things.
We have a big kitchen with a giant oven and, a frigdge with ice cream bars, and an ice maschine for the drinks.
Which objects are grouped together? For example, if each item exists separately in the kitchen, a comma should separate each different object, and there should only be one "and" before the last item.
Objects that are part of other objects can be grouped together. For example, if the ice machine is inside the fridge, you can say "and a fridge with an ice machine" as one phrase.
Our living room is gigant withic. It has a sSamsung television withand a popcorn maschine.
You can use "giant", but "gigantic" is a stylistically better option.
Brands are proper nouns, and should be capitalized.
Using "with" makes it sound as though the popcorn machine is a feature of the television. I'm assuming they are separate items, and so used "and" instead.
It givehas two bathrooms one is with the to. One has a toilet, whilet the other does not.
The first bathroom haves giant walls and a hand/hair dryer.
The twiecesecond bathroom have thes a toilet withand two massage- chairs.
Our bedrooms are soplit by gender: one for the girls, me and my little sister, and one room for the boys, my brothers.
MNaturally, my parents sleep naturally together outogether, as their bedroom is the biglargest in the house.
The bedroom of us childrenchildren's bedroom haves double beds, a table, and a cupboard for our clothes.
We also have also a balcony with a great view.
WithOur garden is full withof all possible plants and flowers with. It also has a crystal blue seapond and trampoline.
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Try adding some exclamation points to emphasize key points, such as the massage chairs in the bathroom or the popcorn machine.
Practice and read up a bit on comma usage rules. They're annoying and difficult, but you'll get them soon!
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or: One with a toilet; the other without.
The first bathroom haves a giant wall and a hand/hair dryer.
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The twiecesecond bathroom have thes a toilet withand two massage- chairs.
I'm not sure what this means. So my correction is probably wrong.
We have also a balcony with a great view.
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I like our house with all theof its amazing things.
We have a big kitchen with a giant oven and a frigdge with an ice cream bar and ice maschine for the drinks.
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Good work.
I like our house, with all theour amazing things.
We have a big kitchen with a giant oven, and a frigdge with ice cream bars and an ice maschine for the drinks.
Our living room is giant, with a sSamsung television withand a popcorn maschine.
Don't forget in English there's no s - just machine :)
It givehas two bathrooms, one is with the toilet the other nofull bathroom and one just with a toilet.
The first bathroom haves a giant wall and a hand/ and hair dryer.
The twiecesecond bathroom haves the toilet with two massage- chairs.
Our bedrooms are soplit: one for the girls (me and my little sister) and one room for the boys (my brothers).
MNaturally, my parents sleep naturally together o. Our bedroom is the biggest in the house.
The bedroom of us childrenchildren's bedroom haves double beds, a table, and a cupboard for our clothes.
We have also a balcony with a great view.
With a garden full with all possible plants and flowers with, a trampoline, and a crystal blue sea and trampolin.
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Good job!
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