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michiru

Nov. 30, 2024

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Our Company Rule 2

Our Company has a strict rule.
If there is a station within 2km from our home, no matter how nearer a bus stop is from our home, we have to use the station for commuting.
Using train is prior to using bus not to get involved in traffic jam and accident.
I'm wondering if I should use bus at my own expense.


うちの会社には厳しいルールがある。
自宅から2キロ以内に駅がある場合、どんなにバス停が近くても、駅を使って通勤しなければならない。
渋滞や事故に巻き込まれないよう、バス通勤よりも電車通勤が優先される。
自費でバスを使おうかどうしようか悩んでいる。

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OurMy Company's Rules 2

Our CMy company has a strict rule.

You could say "our" company if you were talking with a colleague 同僚

But, for anybody else, you would say "my company".

If there is a train station within 2km ofrom our home, no matter how nearer a bus stop is from our home, we have to use the station for commutingregardless if there's a bus stop which is closer, we have to use the train to commute to the office.

Given you are talking about bus and train, you should specific the station: "train station" or "bus station", etc.

"Have to use" is perfect grammar. Alternatively, you could say "we must use".

Using train is prior to using bus not to get involved inMy company prefers people/employees to use the train to avoid people arriving late to work due to traffic jams and accidents.

You should specify who has the preference. I assume you mean your company has this preference.

I'm wonderdeliberating if I should use the bus at my own expense.

"wondering" is fine!

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Very good post!

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michiru

Dec. 3, 2024

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Thank you very much for the corrections and the advice! I learned several new forms and words.

Our Company Rule 2

Our Ccompany has a strict rule.

If there is a train station within 2 km from our home, no matter how much nearer a bus stop is from our home, we have to use the statiotrain for commuting.

In the US, many train stations are also bus stations, so you need to specify that you mean a train station.

Using the train is prior to using bus not to getitized over using the bus, in order to avoid getting involved in traffic jams and accidents.

I'm wondering if I should use the bus at my own expense.

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michiru

Dec. 1, 2024

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Thank you very much for the corrections and the advice!

If there is a station within 2km from our home, no matter how much nearer a bus stop is fromto our home, we have to use the station for commuting.

Using the train is prioreferable to using buthe bus so as not to get involved in traffic jam and accident.

I'm wondering if I should use the bus at my own expense.

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Very close, great job.

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michiru

Dec. 1, 2024

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Thank you very much for the corrections!

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Our Company Rule Part 2

Our Ccompany has a strict rule.

If there is a station within 2km from our home, no matter how nearerclose a bus stop is from our home, we have to use the station for commuting.

Using the train is prioritised to using the bus in order to not to get involved in traffic jams and accidents.

I'm wondering if I should use the bus at my own expense.

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Good writing! What a strange rule...

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michiru

Dec. 1, 2024

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Thank you very much for the corrections!

Our Company Rule 2


Our Company Rule Part 2

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

OurMy Company's Rules 2

Our Company has a strict rule.


Our Ccompany has a strict rule.

Our Ccompany has a strict rule.

Our CMy company has a strict rule.

You could say "our" company if you were talking with a colleague 同僚 But, for anybody else, you would say "my company".

If there is a station within 2km from our home, no matter how nearer a bus stop is from our home, we have to use the station for commuting.


If there is a station within 2km from our home, no matter how much nearer a bus stop is fromto our home, we have to use the station for commuting.

If there is a station within 2km from our home, no matter how nearerclose a bus stop is from our home, we have to use the station for commuting.

If there is a train station within 2 km from our home, no matter how much nearer a bus stop is from our home, we have to use the statiotrain for commuting.

In the US, many train stations are also bus stations, so you need to specify that you mean a train station.

If there is a train station within 2km ofrom our home, no matter how nearer a bus stop is from our home, we have to use the station for commutingregardless if there's a bus stop which is closer, we have to use the train to commute to the office.

Given you are talking about bus and train, you should specific the station: "train station" or "bus station", etc. "Have to use" is perfect grammar. Alternatively, you could say "we must use".

Using train is prior to using bus not to get involved in traffic jam and accident.


Using the train is prioreferable to using buthe bus so as not to get involved in traffic jam and accident.

Using the train is prioritised to using the bus in order to not to get involved in traffic jams and accidents.

Using the train is prior to using bus not to getitized over using the bus, in order to avoid getting involved in traffic jams and accidents.

Using train is prior to using bus not to get involved inMy company prefers people/employees to use the train to avoid people arriving late to work due to traffic jams and accidents.

You should specify who has the preference. I assume you mean your company has this preference.

I'm wondering if I should use bus at my own expense.


I'm wondering if I should use the bus at my own expense.

I'm wondering if I should use the bus at my own expense.

I'm wondering if I should use the bus at my own expense.

I'm wonderdeliberating if I should use the bus at my own expense.

"wondering" is fine!

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