Sept. 30, 2023
Today, I want to tell you why I learning the English language. English is very popular language in the World. It isn't a secret. For me English need to my job, beacause if I know English then I can learning much professional skills. If I have much proffessional skills, I have better job how earlier. If I have better jor, I have much money. If I have much money, I have many opportunities to travel or buy something or make happy my close people. But I think, I need interesting job for me, because if you unhappy on your job, you unhappy in your live. It's very important.
Thanks for reading my journal.
Today, I want to tell you why I'm learning the English language.
Today, I want to tell you why I'm learning English.
English is a very popular language in the World. English is a very popular language in the World.
It isn't a secret. It isn't a secret.
For me English need tois useful for my job, beacause if I knowing English then I can learning muchenhances my professional skills.
English is useful for my job because knowing English enhances my professional skills.
If I have muchbetter proffessional skills, I havewill get a better job how earlifaster.
If I have better professional skills, I will get a better job faster.
If I haveget a better jorb, I will have muchore money.
If I get a better job, I will have more money.
If I have muchore money, I will have manyore opportunities to travel orand buy something or make happy my close people.s. It will also make the people close to me happy.
If I have more money, I will have more opportunities to travel and buy things. It will also make the people close to me happy.
But II also think, I need a more interesting job for me, becausebecause I know that if you are unhappy onwith your job, you will be unhappy inwith your livfe.
I also think I need a more interesting job because I know that if you are unhappy with your job, you will be unhappy with your life.
Feedback
much: * Use it with quantities you cannot count.
I ate too much. How much milk do you need? How much patience do you have left?
many * Use it with quantities you can count.
I ate too many apples. How many apples did you buy? How many cans of milk do you need?
Today, I want to tell you why I'm learning the English language.
Today, I want to tell you why I'm learning the English.
You can just say "English". The language part is implied by stating the name of the language.
English is very popular language in the Wworld.
English is very popular language in the world.
Improper nouns are not capitalized.
For meI need English need tofor my job, beacaussince if I know English then I can learning much many professional skills.
I need English for my job, since if I know English then I can learn many professional skills.
From Britannica's grammar explanation on much vs many: "Much is used to describe mass nouns or noncount nouns like juice, rice, patience, and happiness. When using much, the noun will always be singular; it cannot be plural. Many is used to describe count nouns or nouns that can be counted like books, ideas, leaves, and shoes.
If I have muchany proffessional skills, I can have a better job how earlier.
If I have many professional skills, I can have a better job earlier.
Alternatively: If I have a lot of professional skills. (for the first part of sentence)
Gallaudet University mentions needing articles like "a" in this guideline: "Use “a” or “an” with a singular-count noun when you mean “one of many,” “any,” or “in general.”
If I have a better jorb, I have muchore money.
OR If I have a better job, I have a lot of money.
If I have a better job, I have more money.
OR If I have a better job, I have a lot of money.
I was trying to figure out what you meant, whether you're talking about a lot of money in general or more money compared to a job that isn't as good.
If I have mucha lot of money, I have many opportunities to travel or buy something or make happy my close people.gifts for people I'm close with to make them happy.
If I have a lot of money, I have many opportunities to travel or buy gifts for people I'm close with to make them happy.
I covered some of my feedback here in previous parts about "much" " a lot". Also, "make happy" isn't correct because you need to put the subject (who you're making happy) first. That's why I suggested "make them happy".
But I think, I neeHowever, I also need a job that I find interesting job for me,; because if you're unhappy onwith your job, you're unhappy inwith your livfe.
However, I also need a job that I find interesting; because if you're unhappy with your job, you're unhappy with your life.
I'd suggest looking up a guide on prepositions covering the different uses of words like "with" or "on". "On your job" is not a phrase I've heard native English speakers use. If you're describing an emotion, it would be a modification of "is" after the subject: (ex. I am happy, you are happy, he is happy).
Today, I want to tell you why I'm learning the English language. Today, I want to tell you why I'm learning the English language.
English is a very popular language in the World. English is a very popular language in the World.
It isn't a secretit's obvious.
it's obvious.
you could instead write, "English is obviously a very popular language in the world" or " It's obvious that English is one of the most popular languages in the world."
For meI personally need to learn English need tofor my job, beacause if I know English then I can learning much many professional skills.
I personally need to learn English for my job, because if I know English then I can learn many professional skills.
If I have muchore proffessional skills, I'll have way better job how earliers.
If I have more professional skills, I'll have way better jobs.
If I have a better jorb, I have muchcan earn more money.
If I have a better job, I can earn more money.
If I have muchore money, I'll have manyore opportunities to travel or buy something or make happy my close peoplethe people that are close to me happy.
If I have more money, I'll have more opportunities to travel or buy something or make the people that are close to me happy.
But I think, I need a job that interests me/ a job that is interesting job for me, because if you're unhappy onwith your job, you're also unhappy in your live.
But I think, I need a job that interests me/ a job that is interesting for me, because if you're unhappy with your job, you're also unhappy in your live.
It'Which is very important.
Which is very important.
Feedback
Please keep practicing, I'm sure you'll reach your goals one day. Good luck!
|
Jouranal #10: "How I'm learning English" |
|
Today, I want to tell you why I learning the English language. Today, I want to tell you why I'm learning the English language. Today, I want to tell you why I'm learning the English language.
Today, I want to tell you why I'm learning the English You can just say "English". The language part is implied by stating the name of the language.
Today, I want to tell you why I'm learning |
|
English is very popular language in the World. English is a very popular language in the World. English is a very popular language in the World.
English is very popular language in the Improper nouns are not capitalized. English is a very popular language in the World. English is a very popular language in the World. |
|
It isn't a secret.
you could instead write, "English is obviously a very popular language in the world" or " It's obvious that English is one of the most popular languages in the world." It isn't a secret. It isn't a secret. |
|
For me English need to my job, beacause if I know English then I can learning much professional skills.
From Britannica's grammar explanation on much vs many: "Much is used to describe mass nouns or noncount nouns like juice, rice, patience, and happiness. When using much, the noun will always be singular; it cannot be plural. Many is used to describe count nouns or nouns that can be counted like books, ideas, leaves, and shoes.
|
|
If I have much proffessional skills, I have better job how earlier.
If I have m
If I have m Alternatively: If I have a lot of professional skills. (for the first part of sentence) Gallaudet University mentions needing articles like "a" in this guideline: "Use “a” or “an” with a singular-count noun when you mean “one of many,” “any,” or “in general.”
If I have |
|
If I have better jor, I have much money.
If I have a better jo
If I have a better jo I was trying to figure out what you meant, whether you're talking about a lot of money in general or more money compared to a job that isn't as good.
If I |
|
If I have much money, I have many opportunities to travel or buy something or make happy my close people.
If I have m
If I have I covered some of my feedback here in previous parts about "much" " a lot". Also, "make happy" isn't correct because you need to put the subject (who you're making happy) first. That's why I suggested "make them happy".
If I have m |
|
But I think, I need interesting job for me, because if you unhappy on your job, you unhappy in your live.
But I think, I need a job that interests me/ a job that is interesting
I'd suggest looking up a guide on prepositions covering the different uses of words like "with" or "on". "On your job" is not a phrase I've heard native English speakers use. If you're describing an emotion, it would be a modification of "is" after the subject: (ex. I am happy, you are happy, he is happy).
|
|
It's very important.
|
|
Thanks for reading my journal. |
You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.
Go Premium