We are taking a showerconsumed with an excess of information every day, and I feel it makes me tired.

Watching YouTube, searching on the internet, on the trains, in the taxis, or even just walking the streets, i. It's too hard to avoid commercials and unnecessary information.

In addition, we can easily get the news from all over the world due to the development of the internet.

I know it's important to stay informed, but there is too much information, especially the sad or frightening news.

So, I think it's a good idea to reduce my screen time on the PC and my smartphone to lessenreduce the amount of information I getconsume.

However, it's difficult for me to stop using them because I like playing digital games, watching videos, and drawing illustrations on my iPad.

It might be good for me to quit social media at least.

Feburuary 15th

Recently, I've been thinking about doing a digital detox.

"I've been thinking about digital detoxes" - you are thinking about the general concept of a digital detox. If this is what you meant, we tend to make the noun plural: "Being a forester, I think about trees a lot", "When I was a kid, I really liked dinosaurs", etc

We are takbeing a shower ofed with information every day, and I feelthink it's makesing me tired.

I think I agree with another user's point on this, but you could also say you're being showered *with* something.

Watching YouTube, searching on the internet, on the trains, in the taxis, or even just walking the streets, it's toso hard to avoid commercials and unnecessary information.

In addition, we can easily get the news from all over the world due to the development of the internet.

When talking about news in general, I would drop the "the".

I know it's important to stay informed, but there is just too much, especially all the sad orand frightening newsstuff happening right now.

Feel free to disregard that last correction, it's just a different phrasing that I would probably use myself. Original sentence is perfectly fine, overall.

So, I think it's would be a good idea to reduce my screen time on the PC and my smartphone to lessen the amount of information I get.

I don't often hear people say "smartphone" unless if it's a very formal or academic setting. We usually just say "phone".

Also, when thinking about the effects of something I haven't done yet, I'll use a conditional tense: "I think it would be a good idea..."

However, it's difficult for me to stop using them because I like playing digital games, watching videos, and drawing illustrations on my iPad.

I don't think I've ever heard anyone say "digital game". Instead, we'll say "video game", or commonly just "game" if it's clear we're talking about the kind you'd play on a computer or phone. I've also heard "computer game" used in some more formal contexts, but this is less common.

We are taking a shower ofdeluged / bombarded with information every day, and I feel it makes me tired.

"Taking a shower" is something many people think of positively. Taking a shower doesn't make you tired. If you want a water image, a deluge is strong and often has a negative impact. Another strong word that is often used to describe what you are talking about is bombarded. (We can use "with" or "by" with these two verbs: "deluged by, bombarded by."

Watching YouTube, searching on the internet, on the trains, in the taxis, or even just walking the streets, it's too hard to avoid commercials and unnecessary information.

It could be any train or taxi, so no article is needed.

HoweverUnfortunately, it's difficult for me to stop using them because I like playing digital games, watching videos, and drawing illustrations on my iPad.

If you begin the sentence before this with "So" and then you switch to "However," you are asking the reader to switch focus very quickly, (sort of like walking in one direction then immediately turning and walking back). If you use "Unfortunately" it has less of a contradictory effect imho.