Aug. 12, 2021
Other English exam
Part 1
The exam say: Please write some reasons why you are interested in travel.
I am interested in travel because I would like to know new countries and learn a lot of thing about their culture.
Besides, when I travel I can know new people and they can teach me their city. I usually travell in plane because it is faster than other transports.
Part 2
the exam say: Write an e-mail to your friend. Write about your feelings and what you are planning to do. Write about 50 words. You have ten minutes to do this.
Dear Jose,
How are you? I hope you are fantastic! I'm sorry I didn't write to you before but I've been too busy. I have recived an email and Mr David Price will not be able to attend our next club meeting. I feel very sad because I looked forward to meet him and I wanted a singed book.
But, I am going to reserve a copy of the book and I am going to attend our club meeting.
Let me know if you want a copy of the book.
Alejandro
OAnother English exam
More appropriate word choice because "other" seems like there are only two exams
Part 1
The exam says: Please write some reasons why you are interested in travel.
I am interested in travel because I would like to know about new countries and learn a lot of things about their culture.
Besides, when I travel I can knowmeet new people and they can teachshow me their city.
"Show" would be more natural here
I usually travell in by plane because it is faster than other methods (of transportsation).
What's in parentheses is optional
Part 2
tThe exam says: Write an e-mail to your friend.
Write about your feelings and what you are planning to do.
Write about 50 words.
You have ten minutes to do this.
Dear Jose,
How are you?
I hope you are fantastic!
I'm sorry I didn't write to you before but I've been too busy.
I have received an email and Mr David Price will not be able to attend our next club meeting.
I feel very sad because I was lookeding forward to meeting him and I wanted a singned book.
But, I am going to reserve a copy of the book and I am going to attend our club meeting.
Let me know if you want a copy of the book.
Alejandro
Feedback
Great job! Very minor corrections.
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Other English exam
More appropriate word choice because "other" seems like there are only two exams |
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Part 1 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The exam say: Please write some reasons why you are interested in travel. The exam says: Please write some reasons why you are interested in travel. |
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I am interested in travel because I would like to know new countries and learn a lot of thing about their culture. I am interested in travel because I would like to know about new countries and learn a lot of things about their culture. |
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Besides, when I travel I can know new people and they can teach me their city. Besides, when I travel I can "Show" would be more natural here |
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I usually travell in plane because it is faster than other transports. I usually travel What's in parentheses is optional |
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Part 2 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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the exam say: Write an e-mail to your friend.
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Write about your feelings and what you are planning to do. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Write about 50 words. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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You have ten minutes to do this. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Dear Jose, This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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How are you? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I hope you are fantastic! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I'm sorry I didn't write to you before but I've been too busy. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I have recived an email and Mr David Price will not be able to attend our next club meeting. I have received an email and Mr David Price will not be able to attend our next club meeting. |
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I feel very sad because I looked forward to meet him and I wanted a singed book. I feel very sad because I was look |
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But, I am going to reserve a copy of the book and I am going to attend our club meeting. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Let me know if you want a copy of the book. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Alejandro This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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