March 22, 2025
I went to Oslob and Moalboal with my wife and friends.
First, we departed at 4:50 a.m. We arrived at Jollibee around 6:00 a.m. and had breakfast until 7:00 a.m. Then we arrived in Oslob at 9:00 a.m. and changed our clothes. On the way to Tumalog Falls, we rode on the back of a motorcycle. It was very comfortable. Tumalog Falls was also beautiful.
Furthermore, I swam with a whale shark. It was huge and powerful. Later, we moved to Moalboal, where I swam with sardines and a sea turtle. Unfortunately, due to bad weather, the water was not clear and we couldn’t see them well.
In addition, we went to Tree Shade Spa and had a BBQ lunch. It included a lot of Korean food and mango. It was very delicious.
Finally, I thought I should have joined this activity before diving, because I could have seen a lot more fish than during this activity. I regret it a little.
It was huge and powerful.!
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I recommend including more punctuation ranges, but everything else was spot on. Well done!! I hope you enjoyed the trip.
On the way to Tumalog Falls, we rode on the back of a motorcycle. |
It was very comfortable. |
Tumalog Falls was also beautiful. |
Furthermore, I swam with a whale shark. |
It was huge and powerful. It was huge and powerful You can use this punctuation to emphasise your point 😊 |
Later, we moved to Moalboal, where I swam with sardines and a sea turtle. |
Unfortunately, due to bad weather, the water was not clear and we couldn’t see them well. Unfortunately, Using this punctuation can once again emphasise your point and show emotion in the text ☺ |
In addition, we went to Tree Shade Spa and had a BBQ lunch. |
It included a lot of Korean food and mango. |
It was very delicious. |
Finally, I thought I should have joined this activity before diving, because I could have seen a lot more fish than during this activity. |
I regret it a little. |
Oslob & Moalboal |
I went to Oslob and Moalboal with my wife and friends. |
First, we departed at 4:50 a.m. |
We arrived at Jollibee around 6:00 a.m. |
and had breakfast until 7:00 a.m. |
Then we arrived in Oslob at 9:00 a.m. |
and changed our clothes. |
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