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toshinou_kyouko

Sept. 11, 2024

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Soap&Skin

I'm a huge fan of Soap&Skin. Soap&Skin is the name under which Austrian musician Anja Plaschg is performing.
I like her music for being sad and depressed. Because of her I decided to pick up playing piano, since I wanted to play her songs.
I saw that she was giving a concert in Portugal this summer and decided to visit it.
The concert was part of a goth festival, which was quite surprising, because I don't really think her music suits it well.
On the festival were quite a lot dark clothes, piercing, and interestingly looking people.
The concert went really well and I was all over the moon I managed to visit it. I was grinning constantly during the concert because I was so happy.
I liked it so much that I've already bought tickets for the next years concert in Austria.

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Soap&Skin

I'm a huge fan of Soap&Skin.

Soap&Skin is the name under which Austrian musician Anja Plaschg is performing.

I like her music for being sad and depressed.

Because of her I decided to pick up playing piano, since I wanted to play her songs.

The concert was part of a goth festival, which was quite surprising, because I don't really think her music suits it well.

I was grinning constantly during the concert because I was so happy.

Soap&Skin

I'm a huge fan of Soap&Skin.

Soap&Skin

I'm a huge fan of Soap&Skin.

Soap&Skin is the name under which Austrian musician Anja Plaschg is performing.

I was grinning constantly during the concert because I was so happy.

Soap&Skin


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I'm a huge fan of Soap&Skin.


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Soap&Skin is the name under which Austrian musician Anja Plaschg is performing.


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Soap&Skin is the name under whichstage name of Austrian musician Anja Plaschg is performing. Soap&Skin is the stage name of Austrian musician Anja Plaschg.

More concise and natural.

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I like her music for being sad and depressed.


I like her music for being sad and depresseding music. I like her sad and depressing music.

An alternative word for "depressing" is "melancholy".

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I like her music for being sad and depresseding. I like her music for being sad and depressing.

Because of her I decided to pick up playing piano, since I wanted to play her songs.


Because of her, I decided to pick up playingthe piano, since I wanted to play her songs. Because of her, I decided to pick up the piano since I wanted to play her songs.

It doesn't sound right to me to say "pick up playing".

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Because of her, I decided to pick up playing piano, since I wanted to play her songs. Because of her, I decided to pick up playing piano since I wanted to play her songs.

I saw that she was giving a concert in Portugal this summer and decided to visit it.


I saw that she was givingill play at a concert in Portugal this summer and decided to visit itattend. I saw that she will play at a concert in Portugal this summer and decided to attend.

Music artists do not "give" a concert. You do not "visit" a concert.

I saw that she was giving a concert in Portugal this summer and decided to visit itgo. I saw that she was giving a concert in Portugal this summer and decided to go.

I saw that she was giving a concert in Portugal this summer and decided to visitattend it. I saw that she was giving a concert in Portugal this summer and decided to attend it.

The concert was part of a goth festival, which was quite surprising, because I don't really think her music suits it well.


The concert was part of a goth festival, which was quite surprising, because I don't really think her music suits itfitted in very well. The concert was part of a goth festival which was quite surprising because I don't really think her music fitted in very well.

The sentence is fine from a grammar perspective but "suits it well" didn't sound right to me. In English, we have the phrase "fit in" which sounds a bit more natural: https://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/english/fit-in

The concert was part of a goth festival, which was quite surprising, because I don't really think her music suits it well. The concert was part of a goth festival, which was quite surprising because I don't really think her music suits it well.

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On the festival were quite a lot dark clothes, piercing, and interestingly looking people.


OnAt the festival, there were quite a lot dark clothes, piercings, and interestingly looking people. At the festival, there were quite a lot dark clothes, piercings, and interesting looking people.

OnAt the festival were quite a lot dark clothes, piercings, and interestingly -looking people. At the festival were quite a lot dark clothes, piercings, and interesting-looking people.

OnAt the festival there were quite a lot people with dark clothes, with piercings, and who looked interestingly looking people. At the festival there were quite a lot people with dark clothes, with piercings, and who looked interesting.

The concert went really well and I was all over the moon I managed to visit it.


The concert went really well and I was all over the moon I managed to visit itget tickets. The concert went really well and I was over the moon I managed to get tickets.

Again, "visit" is not used with a concert.

The concert went really well and I was all over the moon that I managed to visitattend it. The concert went really well and I was over the moon that I managed to attend it.

The concert went really well and I was all over the moon I managed to visitattend it. The concert went really well and I was all over the moon I managed to attend it.

I was grinning constantly during the concert because I was so happy.


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I was grinning constantly during the concert because I was so happy. I was grinning constantly because I was so happy.

Nothing wrong with what you wrote, but I would take it out since we already know what you're talking about.

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I liked it so much that I've already bought tickets for the next years concert in Austria.


I liked it so much that I've already bought tickets for theanother concert next years concert in Austria. I liked it so much that I've already bought tickets for another concert next year in Austria.

I liked it so much that I've already bought tickets for the next year's concert in Austria. I liked it so much that I've already bought tickets for next year's concert in Austria.

I liked it so much that I've already bought tickets for the next year's concert in Austria. I liked it so much that I've already bought tickets for next year's concert in Austria.

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