My school day.
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Today I only slept 5 hours, so I was so tired at school during the whole day and I struggled to focus. I had classes of physics, philosophie and english class which is the one I prefer above all. When I came back home I played pubg during an hour but still didn't started my biology homeworks yet I hate biology (and the teacher as well)
Today, I only slept 5 hours, so I was so tired at school during the whole day and I struggled to focus.
I had classes ofin physics, philosophiephilosophy and english classEnglish which is the one I prefer above alllike the most.
When I came back home, I played pubg duringfor an hour but stilland didn't started my biology homeworks yethomework.
Today, I only slept for 5 hours. Because of that, so I was so tired at school during the whole day and I struggled to focus.
I had classes ofin physics, philosophiephilosophy and english class whichEnglish. English is the one I prefer abovemost of all.
When I came back home, I played pubg duringPUBG for an hour, but even though I still didn'thaven't started doing my biology homeworks yethomework.
PUBG is preferably written in all-caps, so let's do that, too.
I hate biology (and the teacher as well).
Today I only slept (for) 5 hours, so I was sovery tired at school during the whole day and I struggled to focus.
"so I was so" - repeating so sounds a little awkward.
I had classes of physics, philosophiephilosophy and englishEnglish class which is the one I prefer above allmy favourite class.
Names of languages and nations are usually capitalised. Replaced "prefer above all" with more natural phrasing
When I came back home I played pubg duringfor an hour but still didn't(haven't / hadn't) started my biology homeworkshomework yet
"I played during an hour" - At some point in the hour, you played pubg (unnatural - you could have played just one minute) "I played for an hour" - You spent 60 minutes playing pubg "hadn't started my biology homework" - you played pubg before doing your biology homework (but maybe you've done it since) "haven't started my biology homework" - at the time of writing, you still need to start your biology homework
Thak you for correcting my text, it is really helpfull!
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