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Youth should be radical.Youth should demand change in the world.Youth should not accept the old order if the world is to move on.


I always hold the belief that being radical is an indispensable character for everyone and undoubtedly we youngsters.

Being radical doesn’t mean acting as rude or impolite,it emphasizes and calls for some show of positivity and critical thinking.I don’t think ambition is a bad word,we are so young that countless possibilities and chances are waiting us to explore.

The world has its pace and speed to move,and it’s impossible to stay at the point,making no efforts to change the world.There must be something that is pioneering in last era but lagging behind in this era.We all know that there isn’t so called true and false,the fact is that we justify most of them based on today’s criterion.So if something needs that change,there is no reason for us not to demand change.

I was once afraid,not just of losing my voice,but of the consequences that change might bring. I found myself torn between the urge to shout and the comfort of silence, between the desire to break free and the fear of what lies beyond. I longed for something new, yet part of me hesitated, clinging to the familiar. My wildness, it seemed, was being devoured not only by laziness and fear, but by the quiet temptation to stay still.

But there must be an Aha moment.

In facing the times and the sense of detachment, one may yell,charge forward, or cry out,for these are all ways of being human. But do not become numb and do not lose the impulse to shed tears,

and then to change.

In the movie detachment,Lucy Liu once said that,
“It's easy to be careless.It takes courage to take care.”

I’m young.

We are young.

There is no reason for us to stay still.

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Youth

Youth should demand change in the world.

Youth should not accept the old order if the world is to move on.

I found myself torn between the urge to shout and the comfort of silence, between the desire to break free and the fear of what lies beyond.

I longed for something new, yet part of me hesitated, clinging to the familiar.

But do not become numb and do not lose the impulse to shed tears,

and then to change.

“It's easy to be careless.

It takes courage to take care.”

I’m young.

We are young.

Youth

I found myself torn between the urge to shout and the comfort of silence, between the desire to break free and the fear of what lies beyond.

I longed for something new, yet part of me hesitated, clinging to the familiar.

My wildness, it seemed, was being devoured not only by laziness and fear, but by the quiet temptation to stay still.

“It's easy to be careless.

It takes courage to take care.”

I’m young.

We are young.

There is no reason for us to stay still.

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shirley

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Youth

Youth should be radical.

Youth should demand change in the world.

Youth should not accept the old order if the world is to move on.

I always hold the belief that being radical is an indispensable character for everyone and undoubtedly we youngsters.

I found myself torn between the urge to shout and the comfort of silence, between the desire to break free and the fear of what lies beyond.

I longed for something new, yet part of me hesitated, clinging to the familiar.

My wildness, it seemed, was being devoured not only by laziness and fear, but by the quiet temptation to stay still.

But do not become numb and do not lose the impulse to shed tears,

and then to change.

“It's easy to be careless.

It takes courage to take care.”

I’m young.

We are young.

There is no reason for us to stay still.

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Youth


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Youth should be radical.


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YThe youth should be radical. The youth should be radical.

I think it's more common to say "the youth" rather than just "youth" when referring to young people. "Youth" on its own is more the time period or quality of being young: "Ah, the innocence of youth."

Youth should be radical. Youth should be radical.

If you say just "youth" it's like you're talking about the concept of youth, young-ness, etc. If you want to specifically refer to young people, you'd have to say "The youth"

Youth should demand change in the world.


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YThe youth should demand change in the world. The youth should demand change in the world.

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Youth should not accept the old order if the world is to move on.


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YThe youth should not accept the old order if the world is to move on. The youth should not accept the old order if the world is to move on.

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I always hold the belief that being radical is an indispensable character for everyone and undoubtedly we youngsters.


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I've always hoeld the belief that being radical is an indispensable character for everyone and undoubted, especially weus youngsters. I've always held the belief that being radical is indispensable for everyone, especially us youngsters.

I've always hoeld the belief that being radical is an indispensable characteristic for everyone and undoubtedly weus youngsters. I've always held the belief that being radical is an indispensable characteristic for everyone and undoubtedly us youngsters.

Being radical doesn’t mean acting as rude or impolite,it emphasizes and calls for some show of positivity and critical thinking.


Being radical doesn’t mean acting as rude or impolite, it emphasizes and calls for some show of positivity and critical thinking. Being radical doesn’t mean acting rude or impolite, it emphasizes and calls for positivity and critical thinking.

Being radical doesn’t mean acting as rude or impolite, as we can, it emphasizes and calls for some show of positivity and critical thinking. Being radical doesn’t mean acting as rude or impolite as we can, it emphasizes and calls for positivity and critical thinking.

Being radical doesn’t mean acting as rude or impolite, it emphasizes and calls for some show of positivity and critical thinking. Being radical doesn’t mean acting rude or impolite, it emphasizes and calls for some show of positivity and critical thinking.

I don’t think ambition is a bad word,we are so young that countless possibilities and chances are waiting us to explore.


I don’t think ambition is a bad word, we are so young that countless possibilities and chances are waiting for us to explore. I don’t think ambition is a bad word, we are so young that countless possibilities and chances are waiting for us to explore.

I don’t think ambition is a bad word,w. We are so young that countless possibilities and chancopportunities are waiting for us to explore. I don’t think ambition is a bad word. We are so young that countless possibilities and opportunities are waiting for us to explore.

I don’t think ambition is a bad word,w. We are so young that countless possibilities and chancopportunities are waiting for us to explore. I don’t think ambition is a bad word. We are so young that countless possibilities and opportunities are waiting for us to explore.

The world has its pace and speed to move,and it’s impossible to stay at the point,making no efforts to change the world.


The world has its pace and speed to move,moving speed, and it’s impossible to stay at thone point, making no efforts to change ithe world. The world has its pace and moving speed, and it’s impossible to stay at one point, making no efforts to change it.

The world has its own pace and speed at which ito move,s, and it’s impossible to stay at the poinkeep up with it, making no effortsit difficult to change ithe world. The world has its own pace and speed at which it moves, and it’s impossible to keep up with it, making it difficult to change it.

This sentence confused me a little, hopefully I've understood it properly anyway. Possible alternative phrasing: "The world moves at its own speed, and it's impossible to keep up with its pace, let alone make any efforts to change the world."

The world has its pace and speed to move, and it’s impossible to stay at the point,forefront while making no efforts to change the world. The world has its pace, and it’s impossible to stay at the forefront while making no efforts to change the world.

I think everyone was a little confused by this sentence. This is how I interpreted it but I'm not sure either Dx

There must be something that is pioneering in last era but lagging behind in this era.


There must be something that iwas pioneering in the last era but lagging behind in this era. There must be something that was pioneering in the last era but lagging behind in this era.

There must be something that iwas pioneering in the last era but lagging behind in this era. There must be something that was pioneering in the last era but lagging behind in this era.

I'm a little bit confused by your use of "pioneering" here. Was something *being* pioneered, or was something pioneering the last era?

There must be something that is pioneering inwas being pioneered in the last era but lagging behind in this era. There must be something that was being pioneered in the last era but lagging behind in this era.

We all know that there isn’t so called true and false,the fact is that we justify most of them based on today’s criterion.


We all know that there isn’t so calledplain true andor false, the fact is that we justify most of themissues based on today’s criterion. We all know that there isn’t plain true or false, the fact is that we justify most issues based on today’s criterion.

We all know that there isn’t so called true and no such thing as "true" or "false,", the fact is that we justify most of them based on today’s criteriona. We all know that there is no such thing as "true" or "false", the fact is that we justify most of them based on today’s criteria.

"So called" is something I'd say if I were mocking a label someone gave for something, or confused about or reluctant to use the label (especially if it's something I've never heard before). Also, "criteria" is the plural of "criterion". One of those weird words that has an irregular plural form for some reason.

We all know that there isn’aren't so -called true and false, the fact is that we justify most of themthings based on today’s criterion. We all know that there aren't so-called true and false, the fact is that we justify most things based on today’s criterion.

So if something needs that change,there is no reason for us not to demand change.


So if something needs that change, there is no reason for us not to demand change. So if something needs that change, there is no reason for us not to demand change.

So if something needs that change, there is no reason for us not to demand that change. So if something needs change, there is no reason for us not to demand that change.

So if something needs thato change, there is no reason for us not to demand change. So if something needs to change, there is no reason for us not to demand change.

I was once afraid,not just of losing my voice,but of the consequences that change might bring.


I was once afraid, not just of losing my voice, but of the consequences that change might bring. I was once afraid, not just of losing my voice, but of the consequences that change might bring.

I was once afraid, not just of losing my voice, but of the consequences that change mightcould bring. I was once afraid, not just of losing my voice, but of the consequences that change could bring.

I was once afraid, not just of losing my voice, but of the consequences that change might bring. I was once afraid, not just of losing my voice, but of the consequences that change might bring.

I found myself torn between the urge to shout and the comfort of silence, between the desire to break free and the fear of what lies beyond.


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I longed for something new, yet part of me hesitated, clinging to the familiar.


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My wildness, it seemed, was being devoured not only by laziness and fear, but by the quiet temptation to stay still.


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My wildness, it seemed, was being devoured not only by laziness and fear, but by the quiet temptation to staynd still. My wildness, it seemed, was being devoured not only by laziness and fear, but by the quiet temptation to stand still.

I think "stand still" is better for metaphoricals

But there must be an Aha moment.


But there must be an 'Aha!' moment. But there must be an 'Aha!' moment.

But there must be an "Aha!" moment. But there must be an "Aha!" moment.

But there must be an "Aha!" moment. But there must be an "Aha!" moment.

In facing the times and the sense of detachment, one may yell,charge forward, or cry out,for these are all ways of being human.


In facing the times and the sense of detachment, one may yell, charge forward, or cry out, for these are all ways of being human. In facing the times and the sense of detachment, one may yell, charge forward, or cry out, for these are all ways of being human.

In facing these times and the sense of detachment, one may yell, charge forward, or cry out, for these are all ways of being human. In facing these times and the sense of detachment, one may yell, charge forward, or cry out, for these are all ways of being human.

In facing these times and theis sense of detachment, one may yell, charge forward, or cry out, for these are all ways of being human. In facing these times and this sense of detachment, one may yell, charge forward, or cry out, for these are all ways of being human.

But do not become numb and do not lose the impulse to shed tears,


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But do not become numb, and do not losignore the impulsetemptation to shed tears, But do not become numb, and do not ignore the temptation to shed tears,

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and then to change.


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and thenor to change. or to change.

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In the movie detachment,Lucy Liu once said that,


In the movie detachment, Lucy Liu once said that, In the movie detachment, Lucy Liu once said that,

In the movie detachment, Lucy Liu once said that, In the movie detachment, Lucy Liu once said,

I would use "that" if I were paraphrasing. But this is a direct quote, so there's no need for it.

In the movie dDetachment, Lucy Liu once said that, In the movie Detachment, Lucy Liu once said that,

“It's easy to be careless.


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It takes courage to take care.”


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I’m young.


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We are young.


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There is no reason for us to stay still.


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There is no reason for us to staynd still. There is no reason for us to stand still.

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