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This weekend, there was a big exam: The Common Test for University Admissions. This test is used for university admissions, and most candidates should take this one because all public universities need this test score. Candidates also take an exam of their university as their second test, which is held in February or March, but both are important. Usually, candidates study past exam questions and prepare for a test. Starting this year, however, this test's trend has been changed, so they couldn't do so. It was a poor thing.
Besides, In Japan, you can enter a university even if you failed the entrance exam last year. If high school students fail a test, some of them choose to study for one year and try again. They are called Ronin, which word means a samurai who doesn't have his master and lead a vagabond life. Ronin's life is filled with studying, so it's hard and under pressure.

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This weekend, there was a big exam: The Common Test for University Admissions.


This weekend, there was a big exam: The Common Test for University Admissions. This weekend there was a big exam: The Common Test for University Admissions.

This test is used for university admissions, and most candidates should take this one because all public universities need this test score.


This test is used for university admissions, and most candidates should take this at least once because all public universities needrequire this test score. This test is used for university admissions, and most candidates should take this at least once because all public universities require this test score.

I felt like “require” sounded more natural here.

Candidates also take an exam of their university as their second test, which is held in February or March, but both are important.


Candidates must also take an exam of their university’s exam as their second test, which is held in February or March, but both are important. Candidates must also take their university’s exam as their second test, which is held in February or March, but both are important.

Usually, candidates study past exam questions and prepare for a test.


Usually, candidates study past exam questions and prepare for athe test. Usually, candidates study past exam questions and prepare for the test.

Starting this year, however, this test's trend has been changed, so they couldn't do so.


Starting this year, however, thise test's trending system has been changed, so they couldn't do sothat. Starting this year, however, the testing system has been changed, so they couldn't do that.

It was a poor thing.


It was a poor thing. It was a poor thing.

This is grammatically correct, but I don’t really know what you mean.

Besides, In Japan, you can enter a university even if you failed the entrance exam last year.


Besides, Iin Japan, you can enter a university even if you failed the entrance exam last yeathe year prior. Besides, in Japan, you can enter a university even if you failed the entrance exam the year prior.

If high school students fail a test, some of them choose to study for one year and try again.


If high school students fail a test, some of them choose to study for oneanother year and try again. If high school students fail a test, some of them choose to study for another year and try again.

They are called Ronin, which word means a samurai who doesn't have his master and lead a vagabond life.


They are called Ronin, which wordis a word that means a“A samurai who doesn't have his master, and leads a vagabond life. They are called Ronin, which is a word that means “A samurai who doesn't have his master, and leads a vagabond life.

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Ronin's life is filled with studying, so it's hard and under pressure.


RA ronin's life is filled with studying, so it's hard and they’re always under pressure. A ronin's life is filled with studying, so it's hard and they’re always under pressure.

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