May 22, 2020
Last night, I suddenly came up with organizing my house. Then, I had cleaned up the kitchen feverishly at midnight. I wonder why suddenly I have an impulse to do something at midnight.
And this morning, as soon as I wake up, I organized a fridge.
After cleaning up something, I always become feel refreshed and I like this moment.
In my house, there are so much stuff, so I want to aim for a minimalist by selling or throwing away it.
Last night, I suddenly came up withdecided to organizinge my house.
Then, I had cleaned up the kitchen feverishly at midnight.
I wonder why suddenly I have an impulse to do somethingI had the impulse to organize and clean at midnight.
And this morning, as soon as I waoke up, I organized athe fridge.
AThen I realized, after cleaning up something, I always become feel refreshed and. I like this momentat refreshing feeling after I clean.
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In my house, there's too much stuff, so I'm trying to become a minimalist. I plan to do this by selling or throwing away some stuff.
Last night, I suddenly came up withdecided to organizinge my house.
Then, I hadI cleaned up the kitchen feverishly at midnight.
I wonder why I suddenly I have anhad the impulse to do something like that at midnight.
And then this morning, as soon as I waoke up, I organized athe fridge.
After cleaning up something, I always become feel refreshed and I like thisat moment.
In my house, tThere areis so much stuff, so in my house. I want to aim for a minimalist style by selling or throwing away it.
I missed something here:
"throwing away it" -> "throwing it away".
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My room was very cluttered, so I tidied it yesterday. It's definitely a good feeling when you finish!
Last night, I suddenly came up with decided to reorganizinge my house.
別の言い方です :)
Then, I hadSo, I cleaned up themy kitchen feverishly at midnight.
feverishlyはあまり使われていないと思います。
I wonder why I suddenly I have anthe impulse to do something at midnight.
And this morning, as soon as I waoke up, I reorganizsed athe fridge.
過去形です
After cleaning up something, I always become feel refreshed and I like this momenat.
In my house, tThere areis so much stuff in my house, so I want to aim for a minimalist bytry and live more minimalist, and start selling or throwing away it[things I don't need].
私だったらこう書きます(^o^)
[things I don't need]はoptionalです!
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Reading your entry has made me want to clean... :')
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Last night, I suddenly came up with an idea to organizinge my house.
You can't say what you wanted to say how you said it, because you need to mention that you thought of what you wanted to do.
You could either say "I suddenly came up with an idea to organize my house," or "I suddenly thought about organizing my house," or"I suddenly decided to organize my house"
Then, I had cleaned up the kitchen feverishly at midnight.
I wonder why suddenly I have aI had a sudden impulse to do something at midnight.
Sounds better this way - also you have to say "had" instead of "have" because your impulse was in the past, so you have to use past tense
And this morning, as soon as I waoke up, I organized athe fridge.
You have to say "woke up" instead of "wake up" because of past tense. You already woke up.
If you say "a fridge", it could be anyone's fridge. When you say "the fridge" or "my fridge", that means you are talking about your specific fridge.
After cleaning up something, I always become feel refreshed and I like this momentfeeling.
I think "feeling" sounds better than "moment" here, because you are saying that you feel refreshed.
In my house, there areis so much stuff, so I want to aim for a minimalist lifestyle by selling or throwing things away it.
"Stuff" is singular, so you should say "is" instead of "are"
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Awesome text! :)
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organizing my house
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Last night, I suddenly came up with organizing my house. Last night, I suddenly came up with an idea to organiz You can't say what you wanted to say how you said it, because you need to mention that you thought of what you wanted to do. You could either say "I suddenly came up with an idea to organize my house," or "I suddenly thought about organizing my house," or"I suddenly decided to organize my house" Last night, I suddenly 別の言い方です :) Last night, I suddenly Last night, I suddenly |
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Then, I had cleaned up the kitchen feverishly at midnight. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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And this morning, as soon as I wake up, I organized a fridge. And this morning, as soon as I w You have to say "woke up" instead of "wake up" because of past tense. You already woke up. If you say "a fridge", it could be anyone's fridge. When you say "the fridge" or "my fridge", that means you are talking about your specific fridge. And then this morning, as soon as I w And this morning, as soon as I w 過去形です And this morning, as soon as I w |
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After cleaning up something, I always become feel refreshed and I like this moment. After cleaning up something, I always become feel refreshed and I like this I think "feeling" sounds better than "moment" here, because you are saying that you feel refreshed. After cleaning up After cleaning up
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In my house, there are so much stuff, so I want to aim for a minimalist by selling or throwing away it. In my house, there "Stuff" is singular, so you should say "is" instead of "are"
私だったらこう書きます(^o^) [things I don't need]はoptionalです!
I missed something here: "throwing away it" -> "throwing it away". |
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