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A regular horror story

Today, I'm recreating this story completely from my mind, so it is going to be very basic.

Down in Alaska, there was a bunker which contained a lot of people and supplies. Why? Because the leader decided to tackle one experiment. He obviously did not say what this experiment is about to his employees, if they would had know what this experiment is about, they would not had accept the job. The experiment was about trying to connect the real world with the meta-physic world.

Everything went wrong, and none of these people could survive to the outcome of the experiment. During the evaluation, many strange and horrifying beings appeared from nowhere and begun to kill everyone they bump into.

As I said before, no one could survive, and rumor has it that the bunker still contains these horrifying monsters down in Alaska.


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A regular horror story

Down in Alaska, there was a bunker which contained a lot of people and supplies.

Why?

The experiment was about trying to connect the real world with the meta-physic world.

As I said before, no one could survive, and rumor has it that the bunker still contains these horrifying monsters down in Alaska.

Down in Alaska, there was a bunker which contained a lot of people and supplies.

Why?

Because the leader decided to tackle one experiment.

A regular horror story


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Today, I'm recreating this story completely from my mind, so it is going to be very basic.


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Down in Alaska, there was a bunker which contained a lot of people and supplies.


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Why?


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Because the leader decided to tackle one experiment.


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Because thea leader had decided to tackle onean experiment. Because a leader had decided to tackle an experiment.

Using ‘the’ is too pronounced when you’re just introducing a character for the first time, you can start using ‘the’ once you’ve introduced them once.

He obviously did not say what this experiment is about to his employees, if they would had know what this experiment is about, they would not had accept the job.


He obviously did not say what this experiment iwas about to his employees, if they would had known what this experiment iit was about, they would not hadve accepted the job. He obviously did not say what this experiment was about to his employees, if they had known what it was about, they would not have accepted the job.

He obviously did not say what this experiment iwas about to his employees, because if they would had known what this experiment iwas about, they would not hadve accepted the job. He obviously did not say what this experiment was about to his employees because if they had known what this experiment was about, they would not have accepted the job.

He obviously did not say what this experiment iswas truly about to his employees, if they would had know what this experiment iwas about, they would not hadve accepted the job. He obviously did not say what this experiment was truly about to his employees, if they would had know what this experiment was about, they would not have accepted the job.

Past tense

The experiment was about trying to connect the real world with the meta-physic world.


The experiment was about trying to connect the real world with the meta-physical world. The experiment was about trying to connect the real world with the metaphysical world.

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Everything went wrong, and none of these people could survive to the outcome of the experiment.


Everything went wrong, and none of these people could survive to the outcome of the experiment. Everything went wrong, and none of these people could survive the outcome of the experiment.

Everything went wrong, and none of these people could survive tod the outcome of the experiment. Everything went wrong and none of these people survived the outcome of the experiment.

Everything went wrong, and none of these people could’ve survive tod the outcome of the experiment. Everything went wrong, and none of these people could’ve survived the outcome of the experiment.

Past tense

During the evaluation, many strange and horrifying beings appeared from nowhere and begun to kill everyone they bump into.


During the evaluation, many strange and horrifying beings appeared from nowhere and beguan to kill everyone they bumped into. During the evaluation, many strange and horrifying beings appeared from nowhere and began to kill everyone they bumped into.

During the evaluation, many strange and horrifying beings appeared from nowhere and beguan to kill everyone they bumped into. During the evaluation, many strange and horrifying beings appeared from nowhere and began to kill everyone they bumped into.

During the evaluation, many strange and horrifying beings began to appeared from nowhere and begun to kill everyone they bump intoencountered. During the evaluation, many strange and horrifying beings began to appear from nowhere and begun to kill everyone they encountered.

As I said before, no one could survive, and rumor has it that the bunker still contains these horrifying monsters down in Alaska.


As I said before, no one could survived, and rumor has it that the bunker still contains these horrifying monsters down in Alaska. As I said before, no one survived, and rumor has it that the bunker still contains these horrifying monsters down in Alaska.

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