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July 26, 2022

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I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ
I want to speak like a native speaker!! Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐Ÿ™
Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ




I just watched "JAILBIRDS" and "GIRLS INCARCERATED" on Netflix.
They really made me think.
I guess people arenโ€™t bad from birth.
I think they do bad things because of their surroundings.
And I learned that relationships are much more important in American prisons than they are in Japanese prisons. It was like a school full of bad guys.
But the prisons I've seen in other documentaries were more extreme, so it made me wonder if these were just nicer prisons, or if the programs mostly showed the good side of prisons, or if the documentaries themselves were fake.
The mystery only deepens...


B: What's it about?
A: Jailbird" is about the daily life of a female inmate in the Sacramento County Jail, and "Girls Incarcerated" is about girls in an Indiana juvenile correctional facility.

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Opinions about sTwo Television Series

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

I want to speak like a native speaker!!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?

You can change whatever you want!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

๐Ÿ™

Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

I just watched "JAILBIRDS" and "GIRLS INCARCERATED"_Jailbirds_ and _Girls Incarcerated_ on Netflix.

We underline the names of television shows.

They really made me think.

I guess people arenโ€™t bad from birth.

I think they do bad things because of their surroundings.

And I learned that relationships are much more important in American prisons than they are in Japanese prisons.

It was like a school full of bad guys.

But the prisons I've seen in other documentaries were more extreme, so it made me wonder if these were just nicer prisons, or if the programs mostly showed the good side of prisons, or if the documentaries themselves were fake.

The mystery only deepens...

B: What's it about?

A: _Jailbird"_ is about the daily life of a female inmate in the Sacramento County Jail, and "Girls Incarcerated" is about girls in an Indiana juvenile correctional facility.

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sho

July 28, 2022

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Opinions about sTwo Television Series

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I want to speak like a native speaker!!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You can change whatever you want!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

๐Ÿ™


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I just watched "JAILBIRDS" and "GIRLS INCARCERATED" on Netflix.


I just watched "JAILBIRDS" and "GIRLS INCARCERATED"_Jailbirds_ and _Girls Incarcerated_ on Netflix.

We underline the names of television shows.

They really made me think.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I guess people arenโ€™t bad from birth.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I think they do bad things because of their surroundings.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

And I learned that relationships are much more important in American prisons than they are in Japanese prisons.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It was like a school full of bad guys.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But the prisons I've seen in other documentaries were more extreme, so it made me wonder if these were just nicer prisons, or if the programs mostly showed the good side of prisons, or if the documentaries themselves were fake.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The mystery only deepens...


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

B: What's it about?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A: Jailbird" is about the daily life of a female inmate in the Sacramento County Jail, and "Girls Incarcerated" is about girls in an Indiana juvenile correctional facility.


A: _Jailbird"_ is about the daily life of a female inmate in the Sacramento County Jail, and "Girls Incarcerated" is about girls in an Indiana juvenile correctional facility.

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