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July 26, 2022

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I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ
I want to speak like a native speaker!! Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐Ÿ™
Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


I finished "darktourist" on Netflix.
Some of the stories were quite intense.
I know that we shouldn't judge what people believe, but there were many things that shocked me and that I didn't understand. It was good to be reminded that there are all kinds of people in the world. I especially liked the part with the animation and music at the opening of the show.

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What I Think of _Dark Tourist_

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Opinion about _Dark Tourist_

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Opinions about _Dark Tourist_

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

I want to speak like a native speaker!!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?

You can change whatever you want!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

๐Ÿ™

Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

I finished "d_Darkt Tourist"_ on Netflix.

Some of the stories were quite intense.

I know that we shouldn't judge what people believe, but there were many things that shocked me and that I didn't understand.

It was good to be reminded that there are all kinds of people in the world.

I especially liked the part with the animation and music at the opening of the show.

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sho

July 28, 2022

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Opinions about sa Series

or What I Think of _Dark Tourist_ or Opinion about _Dark Tourist_ or Opinions about _Dark Tourist_

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!


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๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ


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I want to speak like a native speaker!!


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Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You can change whatever you want!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

๐Ÿ™


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I finished "darktourist" on Netflix.


I finished "d_Darkt Tourist"_ on Netflix.

Some of the stories were quite intense.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I know that we shouldn't judge what people believe, but there were many things that shocked me and that I didn't understand.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It was good to be reminded that there are all kinds of people in the world.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I especially liked the part with the animation and music at the opening of the show.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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