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sho

July 26, 2022

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Opinion about series

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ
I want to speak like a native speaker!! Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐Ÿ™
Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


I found a very interesting show! ๐Ÿ˜‹
I watch it to learn about various people's feelings and stuff, and it broadens my horizons. Some people say that "making a program like this is discriminating against people with disabilities", but I have learned about some diseases and symptoms thanks to this program. So, I think it's a good opportunity for people who are not familiar with diseases and things like that, including me, to learn more about them. If I think of it as a step toward better understanding and less discrimination and bullying against minorities as everyone gets to know various people, I think it's a very socially beneficial show. And, I found out that compared to Japanese relationship counseling services, in the U.S., quite few young people go to these services. I have never heard of 18 year olds going in Japan. I also found that American women care quite a bit about a man's height. I believe women in Japan also care, but not as much as women in the U.S. It's very interesting to learn this kind of information. The only problem is that there are only English subtitles, so I can only understand about half of what is being said.๐Ÿ˜ต
I need to study...๐Ÿคฆ๐Ÿ”ฅ

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Opinion about sa Series

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

I want to speak like a native speaker!!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?

You can change whatever you want!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

๐Ÿ™

Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

I found a very interesting show!

๐Ÿ˜‹

I watch it to learn about various people's feelings and stuff, and it broadens my horizons.

Some people say that "making a program like this is discriminating against people with disabilities"," but I have learned about some diseases and symptoms thanks to this program.

So, I think it's a good opportunity for people who are not familiar with diseases and things like that, including me, to learn more about them.

If I think of it as a step toward better understanding and less discrimination and bullying against minorities as everyone gets to know various people, I think it's a very socially beneficial show.

And, I found out that compared to Japanese relationship counseling services, in the U.S., quite a few young people go touse these services in the U.S.

I have never heard of 18 year olds gousing them in Japan.

I also founlearned that American women care quite a bit about a man's height.

or

I also discovered that American women care quite a bit about a man's height.

I believe women in Japan also care, but not as much as women in the U.S. It's very interesting to learn this kind of information.

The only problem is that there subtitles are only in English subtitles, so I can only understand about half of what is being said.๐Ÿ˜ต

I need to study...๐Ÿคฆ๐Ÿ”ฅ

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sho

July 28, 2022

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_The Undateables_ใจใ„ใ†seriesใงใ™๏ผ
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mari

July 28, 2022

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ๆ•™ใˆใฆใใ‚Œใฆใ‚ใ‚ŠใŒใจใ†ใ”ใ–ใ„ใพใ—ใŸ๏ผ

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sho

July 28, 2022

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ๆ•™ใˆใฆใใ‚Œใฆใ‚ใ‚ŠใŒใจใ†ใ”ใ–ใ„ใพใ—ใŸ๏ผ

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Opinion about sa Series

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!


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๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ


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I want to speak like a native speaker!!


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Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ


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Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?


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You can change whatever you want!


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It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!


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๐Ÿ™


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Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.


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I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I found a very interesting show!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

๐Ÿ˜‹


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I watch it to learn about various people's feelings and stuff, and it broadens my horizons.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Some people say that "making a program like this is discriminating against people with disabilities", but I have learned about some diseases and symptoms thanks to this program.


Some people say that "making a program like this is discriminating against people with disabilities"," but I have learned about some diseases and symptoms thanks to this program.

So, I think it's a good opportunity for people who are not familiar with diseases and things like that, including me, to learn more about them.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

If I think of it as a step toward better understanding and less discrimination and bullying against minorities as everyone gets to know various people, I think it's a very socially beneficial show.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

And, I found out that compared to Japanese relationship counseling services, in the U.S., quite few young people go to these services.


And, I found out that compared to Japanese relationship counseling services, in the U.S., quite a few young people go touse these services in the U.S.

I have never heard of 18 year olds going in Japan.


I have never heard of 18 year olds gousing them in Japan.

I also found that American women care quite a bit about a man's height.


I also founlearned that American women care quite a bit about a man's height.

or I also discovered that American women care quite a bit about a man's height.

I believe women in Japan also care, but not as much as women in the U.S. It's very interesting to learn this kind of information.


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The only problem is that there are only English subtitles, so I can only understand about half of what is being said.๐Ÿ˜ต


The only problem is that there subtitles are only in English subtitles, so I can only understand about half of what is being said.๐Ÿ˜ต

I need to study...๐Ÿคฆ๐Ÿ”ฅ


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